Xemina

You're pretty good for a beginner!

Here is a slight correction of it:

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Bonjour mes copains ! (We are annoying and love to put a space between exclamation and interrogation marks; doesn't apply to period/full point)

Je suis Xémina, une bulle violette avec la le symbole "Delta V". J'aime la musique, l'astronomie et le l'histoire. Mon livre preferée ("é" for male, and "ée" for female, and "livre" is considered as a male noun) c' est Oliver Twist du autor de l'auteur anglais Charles Dickens, et mon film preferée (same story, "film" is a male noun) c' est La morte du Stalin La Mort de Staline, une comédie anglaise sur la Russie en les 1950s dans les années 1950 (c'est banni en Russie ! ). J'aime aussi la culture et les langues du monde, est et pour cette raison j'apprends le français. En tous cas, je pense que ma mon texte (male noun) et sufficientment suffisamment longue ("texte" is male) et que tu n'as pas lu cette (je ne sais pas pourquoi je continue en écrivant d’écrire, bien je arrêterai m’arrête, je arrêterai m’arrête...)
Comment est ma mon texte,

French is a true PITA to learn, and this for every population speaking it. Even after a whole life, some who learnt it as their first language are still making first grade mistakes 

Don't worry about it. In my scholarship, I got nine years of French, and three years of literature. I ended with results which were more than decent... and the auto-correct flashed at three occasions in my answer to you 

Now the good part is both English and French has evolved together and influenced each other. While about 45-50% of modern English uses words with a Latin and Neo-Latin basis, French is also counting a lot of English words in its dictionary. Quickly you will start to recognize those, and they could help you to create easier sentences in French.

We also have a lot of words from other Neo-Latin languages (mainly Italian and Spanish), but also from Saxon languages, and even from Russian, but that's another story.

I noticed a few myself! Thanks! I knew a few were off but I wrote this at 11:00(pm), so my brain wasn't exactly "working".

Impressive...good luck !

It is a pretty good start!

However, there are "1.5" slight mistakes:

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Au revoir, le type qu'aime le astronomie, DeltaVerb

 

Why 1.5? Because "qu'aime" is potentially a right choice. The correct way would be "qui aime", but it does not mean that you were absolutely wrong with it, as many French speaking persons are "jumping" some pronunciation steps while speaking. The problem here is that "qu'aime" could be interpreted as a mistake, which is somewhat particular... as almost nobody would write " je aime " but " j'aime ".

The case of "le astronomie" is easier, and the correct writing would be "l'astronomie", without the "e". Le, La, and Les are pronouns replacing a certain person, or a thing's name. If the first letter of the word is a consonant, you have to use the whole pronoun, such as:

* The sea ---> La mer. " L'mer " would be incorrect.

* The launchpad ---> Le pas-de-tir.

On the other hand... just like in English, " h " is an exception in French too. Just like "an hour" is considered as correct instead of "a hour", you will find a lot a similar cases in french, such as "le hotel" which is wrong. The correct way to write it would be " l'hotel ", the same with others H-starting words, like " l'hopital " or " l'helicoptere ".

To resume, the best way for you to determine the use of le, la, les, or l' is to consider the first letter of each words:

* If it is a vowel, the use of " l' " is mandatory.

* If it is a consonant, you have to use " le ", " la ", or " les ".

* Do not forget the exception of the H, but it's one of the (many) common points we got with the English language, at least 

Thanks! I just noticed the l'astronomie thing now.