I have been thoroughly enjoying your story for the last few months. (Despite a late start) I especially like how you gave the N1 a chance at success.
I do have a couple of questions for you though, they are very minor, and should not be rushed.
1st: (This is the most minor) In your most recent post, where on the Moon did Apollo XXV land? You did not say.
2nd and finally: Some of your screenshots from previous entries appear to have gone MIA, would it be possible for you to retrieve and re-post them? If you have already tried and failed to do so, then don't bother.
Again, no need to rush. I very much enjoy your entries, and I encourage you to continue.