Time Explorers - A Sci-Fi story. Chapter 1 is up!

[NSEP]

Hi all. I am writing my first story now! Here is some info:

Time Explorers

Genre: Sci-Fi.

Written by: Jbaltus (AKA @NSEP)

Plot:

In the year 2081, 6 people go on an exploration mission to solve all the mysteries about different periods in time and alternative timelines. Their real mission was to only do scientific research, but their mission becomes just more than that...

Expected FAQ

Q: Is this going to be a story that will be posted on the forum like the mission reports we have on this forum?

A: Yes, probably. So you peeps do not have to wait months and months to read the story  

Q: Is this really your first story?

A: Not really, i made comic books when i was around 8 years old, none of them have been released to the public. This is my first story that is going to be released to the public and that is also independent from KSP.

Q: Will this involve Romance or Drama?

A: No, its just an adventure full of interesting things they go through. No death or intense kissing is included, because that is just yucky. There will be some of people with diseases though, just to add a more yucky effect to it. They take a visit to people with the black death for example.

Q: Since i and almost everybody here likes space, will it include space?

A: Yes, when they need to travel from time period to time period, they need to get into space first, for safety reasons. They will be flying on a heavy plane SSTO.

 

If you have more questions, feel free to ask

 

More stuff will come soon, stay patient!

 

Edited October 16, 2016 by NSEP

[NSEP]

Flight path:

1. 3.8 billion years ago, to research life on early Earth.

2. 515 million years ago, to take a dive and explore the creatures that lived during the Cambrian Explosion

3. 210 million years ago to study early dinosaur life.

4. 64 million years ago, to study the aftermath of a meteorite impact.

5. 24 million years ago, to study life after the death of all Dino's

6. 800.000 years ago, to study and interact with early humans

7. 6.000 BC, to interact with early civilizations.

8. 0BC, to witness Jesus coming back from the dead.

9. 1400AD, to research diseases like the black death.

10. 1890AD, to have a chat with Thomas Edison.

11. AT 2, to research a random alternate timeline

12. AT 3, to research a world where humans never existed.

 

This is the flight path!

 

[NSEP]

Chapter 1 is up!

Spoiler

Lizzy McDoya is chilling on the couch while her roommate Arnold Roest is doing his daily exercise, Lizzy is a kindergarten teacher, but since it is summer, all the toddlers have summer break. There is nothing for her to do expect being lazy. She could wash the dishes, but thats no fun, that makes her summer break seem more like prison time than free time.

Arnold on the other hand is a P.E teacher, but he also helps overweight people to lose weight, he really does some amazing work. Lizzy remembers when she was overweight too, she ate a lot of food, but then, somehow the fat burned itself, and she became a skeleton in weeks. This still goes on to date. Lizzy herself thinks it is caused by bacteria feeding on her body fat, wich may also cause her brighter than before pale skin.

Lizzy thought about doing something special too, like, going to space or something. She closes her eyes. The only option is to dream about it. She thought. But when she closes her eyes, she hears three knocks on the door. Arnold opens the door, his face becomes blood red afterwards. It is the people from the Special Secret Service. A man with a black suit and a black hat gives Arnold a golden envelope, "For Lizzy McDoya" he said with a rather evil voice. The man closes the door hard, with a loud bang. Lizzy opens her eyes in shock.

Arnold gives the envelope to Lizzy. Lizzy runs to the toilet and locks herself in it. She remembers the video clip that played at school 7 years ago. They said that the golden envelope has an inviting of a secret mission/task. She opens the envelope, there is an invitation in it. It says:

Dear Lizzy,

You have been invited to be a crew member of the TEM-1 (Time Exploration Mission 1) from the Science Departement. Tommorow on 1:30 PM, a woman with a white and gold (not blue and black suit, ok thats a pretty old joke, like 65 years old) suit comes to pick you up with a black taxi to the discussion table at the Kerman Space Centre where you can meet your crew, ask all your questions, and have free entry to our space museum where you can talk with your crew members. See you there! (Your parents already know that BTW)

(Alexander Kermans Signature)

Lizzy opens her eyes wide, she unlocks the door of the toilet room and walks to Arnold, "Read this!" She said. Arnold grabs the invitation paper and reads. "Damn! Good luck you got there girl!". Arnold gives Lizzy the invite back. Lizzy pulls a cute face to Arnold. She pulls out her tongue. Thats because she is a kindergarten teacher, who actually learns from her "students".

She walks to her room and prepares for the big day, she pulls her special dress out of her closet and stuffs it into the washing machine. She needs to get ready, tommorow is an important day.

Ask any question or give feedback! Thanks for reading!

(Fixed the grammar with help from @The Raging Sandwich)

 

Edited October 19, 2016 by NSEP

[The Raging Sandwich]

If you don't mind, can I correct some small grammatical errors?

On 10/16/2016 at 4:40 PM, NSEP said:

Chapter 1 is up!

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Lizzy McDoya is chilling on the couch while her roommate Arnold Roest is doing his daily exercise, Lizzy is a kindergarten teacher, but since it is summer, all the toddlers have summer break. There is nothing for her to do expect being lazy. She could wash the dishes, but thats no fun, that makes her summer break seem more like prison time than free time.

Arnold on the other hand is a P.E teacher, but he also helps overweight people to lose weight, he really does some amazing work. Lizzy remembers when she was overweight too, she ate a lot of food, but then, somehow the fat burned itself, and she became a skeleton in weeks. This still goes on to date. Lizzy herself thinks it is caused by bacteria feeding on her body fat, wich may also cause her brighter than before pale skin.

Lizzy thought about doing something special too, like, going to space or something. She closes her eyes. The only option is to dream about it. She thought. But when she closes her eyes, she hears three knocks on the door. Arnold opens the door, his face becomes blood red afterwards. It is the people from the Special Secret Service. A man with a black suit and a black hat gives Arnold a golden envelope, "For Lizzy McDoya," he said with a rather evil voice. The man closes the door hard, with a loud bang. Lizzy opens her eyes in shock.

Arnold gives the envelope to Lizzy. Lizzy runs to the toilet and locks herself in it. She remembers the video clip that played at school 7 years ago. They said that the golden envelope has an inviting of a secret mission/task. She opens the envelope, there is an invitation in it. It says:

Dear Lizzy,

You have been invited to be a crew member of the TEM-1 (Time Exploration Mission 1) from the Science Departement. Tommorow on 1:30 PM, a woman with a white and gold (not blue and black suit, ok thats a pretty old joke, like 65 years old) suit comes to pick you up with a black taxi to the discussion table at the Kerman Space Centre where you can meet your crew, ask all your questions, and have free entry to our space museum where you can talk with your crew members. See you there! (Your parents already know that BTW)

(Alexander Kermans Signature)

Lizzy opens her eyes wide, she unlocks the door of the toilet room and walks to Arnold, "Read this!" She said. Arnold grabs the invitation paper and reads. "Damn! Good luck you got there, girl!". Arnold gives Lizzy the invite back. Lizzy pulls a cute face to Arnold. She pulls out her tongue. That's because she is a kindergarten teacher, who actually learns from her "students".

She walks to her room and prepares for the big day, she pulls her special dress out of her closet and stuffs it into the washing machine. She needs to get ready, tommorow is an important day.

 

It was pretty good! Can't wait to read more. 

Also, might I suggest if you haven't already, you should put this on Wattpad.com! It will get viewed more by people who's interested in this genre there. (Which there are quite a bit of.)

Edited October 17, 2016 by The Raging Sandwich

[NSEP]

On 18 oktober 2016 at 1:43 AM, The Raging Sandwich said:

If you don't mind, can I correct some small grammatical errors?

It was pretty good! Can't wait to read more. 

Also, might I suggest if you haven't already, you should put this on Wattpad.com! It will get viewed more by people who's interested in this genre there. (Which there are quite a bit of.)

Thanks! 

Thanks for the suggestion of Wattpad, will try it out soon.

[TOMMY (JEB 2.0)]

it has bin a long time sins uplode plz uplode soon

[NSEP]

4 hours ago, TOMMY (JEB 2.0) said:

it has bin a long time sins uplode plz uplode soon

This has been discontinued for a while, please take note of that,