Ksp cinematic i made , I'd like to have your thought

[Oraldo revak]

Hy folks, i made a little Ksp "Movie" don't know if i can call this like that. Just wanted to have yours opinons thanks.

 

ps: I don't know if i have the right , to do this kind of publicity of this forum , so sorry if it's forbidden

[Snark]

Moving to Fan Works.

[Rocket In My Pocket]

Wow, was actually really good!

Nice job. Very dramatic.

Why Jeff and not Jeb though?

[Oraldo revak]

Pocket : I couldn't make Jeb die.. He is so iconic.

 

ps: i don't know how to answer to you directly . I am a Noob here

Edited December 22, 2018 by Oraldo revak

[Rocket In My Pocket]

4 hours ago, Oraldo revak said:

Pocket : I couldn't make Jeb die.. He is so iconic.

 

ps: i don't know how to answer to you directly . I am a Noob here

You can quote me with the quote button, or use an "@" symbol in front of my name to get my attention. (Or anyone's for that matter.)

I hear ya, lol! Still, it would have been kind of touching to see Jeb sacrifice himself for Bill, while Val is forced to make the tough call about leaving him. Anyways, just a small critique; over all it was fantastic!

[theJesuit]

This is excellent.  We'll edited.  Great to see the squad cinematics in a new context

Also, the first and second time the kerbal shadow fell across the solar panel... awesome work! I enjoyed that.

Peace.

[steuben]

Minor technical point. You will want to run your script though a spell and grammar checker, focus on grammar. For example, you had rendezvous  written two different ways. Everything was spelled correctly, just not always in English. It looks like it reflexively defaulted to french.

But a good first showing.

[Oraldo revak]

9 hours ago, steuben said:

Minor technical point. You will want to run your script though a spell and grammar checker, focus on grammar. For example, you had rendezvous  written two different ways. Everything was spelled correctly, just not always in English. It looks like it reflexively defaulted to french.

But a good first showing.

Yes , i was afraid about that, because yeah i'm French. I would try to find a english speaker to correct thoses problemes , in some future project. Or if you have any Grammar checker website to give , i think it will do.

Thank you for taking the time to watched my video.
@steuben

Edited December 23, 2018 by Oraldo revak

[Oraldo revak]

11 hours ago, theJesuit said:

This is excellent.  We'll edited.  Great to see the squad cinematics in a new context

Also, the first and second time the kerbal shadow fell across the solar panel... awesome work! I enjoyed that.

Peace.

Glad you liked this little detail @theJesuit