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Hey, guys! For the last several months i've been working on my new KSP video. It would be action miniseries of 6 episodes, 20-25 minutes each. Here we go!

 

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Hi Rus,

Happy to take a look at this for you but I’d prefer to send the revised sections of dialogue by forum private message rather than email, if that’s OK?

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27 minutes ago, KSK said:

Hi Rus,

Happy to take a look at this for you but I’d prefer to send the revised sections of dialogue by forum private message rather than email, if that’s OK?

Yes, sure.

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You're looking for general spelling, grammar, and construction...  I'll feed it through my mills.

What time frame are you looking at? I probably won't get much done until early next week.

Have you done any filming yet? In case any edits need to keep the same length of speech.

The tricky part for me for will be keeping my voice out of your text.

I have a babelfished copy of the whole script, if anybody is interested.

 

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There's a ton of work already gone into this - as in eighteen video chunks which, I believe, are going to be merged into a shorter number of more substantial sections for the finished version.

I'm basically watching a video segment at a time and then revising the relevant subtitles. But yeah - 'revision' is really just minor tweaks to make Rus's, already very good, English a bit more idiomatic. Hopefully I'm keeping the same tone and general feel in the process.

I can't pretend to be entirely neutral about this project now but it's well worth a watch! Great craft designs, some lovely little post-production touches, and solid character moments too. Keep an eye out for it, folks!

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Ok, thanks to KSK the job is done. And the first episode is finally here!

 

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Good to watch it as one 20 minute episode rather than three or four chunks!

Any typos or grammatical snafus... well they're down to me. 

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Will say that's a classic Jeb line, "Well, I could do it without you" 

You put a ton of effort into that, so cheers for that as well. 

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13 minutes ago, Alpha 360 said:

Will say that's a classic Jeb line, "Well, I could do it without you" 

You put a ton of effort into that, so cheers for that as well. 

I agree!

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