Project Chaos (Chapter 2 Episode 4: Rocket Ram)

[ffx]

Hello, everyone. My name is ffx. This is a sandbox mission report. The current plot long story short is that the ksc just gets sucked by a wormhole to the RSS universe and some thing is trying to destory the ksc
This is also my first story time
@jimmymcgoochiefor inspiring me to create this

Also text in () are creators comment

Chapter 1: Warped
  Episode 0/Backstory: Scroll down lol
  Episode 1: Warped:

  Episode 2: Rising Tensions

Chapter 2: Chaos and War
  Episode 3

 Episode 4
 

Spoiler

Early in the morning in the KSC
Jeb peeks to the hangar the creation that Bill created.
Jeb: What shenanigans have you been up lately.
Bill: Uhhhhhhhhhhhhh its a solid rocket motor plane with detachable wings.
Jeb: GIVE ME ACCESS NOW, I WANT TO RIDE IT.
Suddenly
Jeb: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, WHY IM BEING SUCKED TO THE SKY *Is being suked to the sky*
Bill: SAAAAAAMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *Same*
Bob: MUST COLLECT SCIENCE NOW
Meanwhile Gene, Wernher are in the same room
Gene: Why are the buildings detaching from the ground? *Yawns* Ohh god i need koffee now.
Wernher: Same, *Yawns too* i forgot to drink koffee we dont know
And Gus came
Gus: WTH, The buildings are taking off from the ground AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
Eve Kerman also came to the building
Eve: FINALY MY THEORIES ARE CORRECT, EVERYONE CALLES ME THE LOCAL MADMEN 
YET EVERYONE IS WRONG YES, FINALY I CAN BE REGARDED AS SANE!!!!
Gene: STOP IT, EVE!
And thus Chapter 0 ended
(Im not bother enogh to add images for chapter 0 becuase i have a rss instal and it will break the impresion)

 

Edited August 27, 2021 by ffx

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Did a bit of a hiatus, chapter 1 is coming soon

[Vanamonde]

Oh hi. Your report of a mission has been moved to Mission Reports, and good luck with it. 

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ok chapter 1 time

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Episode 1: Warped

Spoiler

(Our new location)
Gene: Did we land safely?
Wernher: With some superficial damage, such as the rnd slightly sinking, yes
Gene: Mabye we crushed something below us
*large explosion*
Wernhir: Is that a fuel tank explosion
Gene: Yes, but i dont know if it is ours
Wernher: Ok, anyway where are we?
*Bob just waddled there*

(To lasy to change the suits, wish ksp has shirts, but 1.12 came out , Gene and Wernhir is next to grass, bill is the kerbal walking)
Bob: Why can i see things realy far?
Gene: Are we in the HSS (Human Space Program) game's homeword, Earth?
Wernhir: Dont jump to conclusions yet, we must research the pla-
*Then a stranger kerbal came*

(Again, bill, wernhir, and gene is the kerbals on top the pic, and the stranger is the kerbal bellow)
???: What are you doing
Bob: Just talking
???: Did you just crush a SSPC reseach base and some fuel tanks
Gene: Uhhhhhhh, yeah?
???: By the way my name is SamAltrax
SamAltrax: YOU HAVE VIOLATED THE RULES, NOW TIME YOU TO DIE, TRATORS
Gene: WAIT A SECO-
*sam shot his gun to Gene's arm*
And thus the first episode ended
EDIT: im not going to make the parts, insted i will edit the first thread

 

Edited August 26, 2021 by ffx

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@Stormpilot  @Ben J. Kerman , ok if follower dosnt work, i ping you to read my newest story

Edited August 17, 2021 by ffx

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Episode 2: Rising Tensions

Spoiler

Gene: d-did you j-just shot my arm?
Sam: YES TRATIORS
Bob: I wish this day never come but i must pull out my glock
Wernhir: YOU HAVE A GLOCK?
Bob: Yes but i wish i never use it
*Bob shoots Sam and he just run away*
 
(Gene, Wernhir and Bob are the kerbals below and Sam is the kerbal running)
Gene: Why is sam running away from us?
Wernhir: Mabye hes afraid of Bob?
Gene: And where?
Bob: We dont know.
*Meanwhile, Sam is standing in front of a croud of heavly armed kerbals*
Sam: EVERYONE, A NEW INSURGENCY HAS DESTORY ONE OF OUR RESEARCH BASE.
Sam: WE SHALL BURN THE INSURGENCY! DEATH TO THE INSURGENCY!
Croud: DEATH TO THE INSURGENCY! DEATH TO THE INSURGENCY!
Sam: GLORY TO THE SSPC!
Croud: GLORY TO THE SSPC!
And thus episode 2 has ended
 

Spoiler

Btw the SSPC is Samaltrax Specialized Protected Corporation, not Society for Protective Coatings

 

 

Edited August 30, 2021 by ffx
Shhhhh, story point lol

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rng decided to do this

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Episode 3: Chaos and War

Spoiler

*While sam is hyping the croud, Eve and Gus is still talking about eachother*
(I dont know why suddly the kerbals float over the mesh)
Gus: STOP TALKING ABOUT THE UNIVERSE THEO-
Eve: YOU FOOLS REJECETS REAILTY, THERE ARE OTHER UNIVERSES
Gus: WE ARE TIRED FROM HEARING YOUR STUFF, THERE IS NO EVEDENCE
Eve: OK, THEN HOW ABOUT THE MONOLITH, WHY DOES IT SAY SQUAD, DUMB-DUMB
Gus: IT COULD BE OLD KERB-
*Suddenly, lots of gunshots are heard*
Gus: WTH IS GOING ON NOW, GET IN ADMIN NOW!

*Eve and Gus is runining to Admin*
Gus: Phew, we are now safe, but we must fight back
Eve: We cant charge, becuase they have armor
Gus: Heh, your actuly sane for once. Anyway have you heard of guns
Eve: NEVER!
Gus: Uhhh, a gun is a thing that shoots bullets, bullets makes kerbal cant do anything if shot in the right place, it seams like the perfect weapon to fight
Eve: GIMME NOW
Gus: We need cartilages now to put in the bullets, wait a bit ok
Eve: 
*Gus is searching for carilages when there is a strange book in the corner*
Gus: Huh thats a strange book, its called the "History of The Rebelion"
Gus (conscience): its just probaly a boring fiction book
Gus: Agree, but we have enogh drama now
Gus (conscience): bla, bla, goverment bad, bla, bla. But its going to be a fun read when we are waiting on something
Gus: Yeah lol
*Gus search a little longer and came back to Eve*
Gus: Eve, heres some guns with cartilages
Eve: TIME TO MOW SOME FOOLS
Gus: Your not a machine gunner, take some stealth too
*Eve instaly gets to gunning postion next to admin and starts shooting then enemy*
Gus: HELLLYAAAAAA
*Gus also starts shooting the enemy and other kerbals are following him"
And thus episode 3 ended

Spoiler

Yeah, are you sure

Spoiler

That book is going to cause some chaos to the good guys when it is read

 

 

 

Edited August 26, 2021 by ffx
forget to remove hint for old system

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I going to take a short break for 4 days, see me there

Edited August 19, 2021 by ffx

[Vagrant203]

A few suggestions. 

1. Spelling and grammar cleanup

2. Send out some spacecraft on a mission to report on, and tie the mission in with your storyline.

3. No more giant text. Caps lock is fine for yelling. Use bold text and caps lock for extra loud yelling.

4. Consider combining all the story posts.

5. Seriously, clean up the spelling and grammar. Lots of missing punctuation and misspelling here.

The story shows some promise, but not enough spaceships yet. Keep at it, mate.

[ffx]

9 hours ago, Vagrant203 said:

1. Spelling and grammar cleanup

2. Send out some spacecraft on a mission to report on, and tie the mission in with your storyline.

3. No more giant text. Caps lock is fine for yelling. Use bold text and caps lock for extra loud yelling.

4. Consider combining all the story posts.

5. Seriously, clean up the spelling and grammar. Lots of missing punctuation and misspelling here.

1. Im not a native english speaker so my grammar isnt the best and im not bothered to put the whole text through google traslate
2. Spacecrafts are coming
3. Done
4. Then i must report to the mods to combine it
5. I tried but i failed 
Also after my friend with a online name of samaltax (yep samaltax do actuly exist) saied mate to me, suddenly there is a lot of people calling me mate, huh

Edited August 20, 2021 by ffx

[Vagrant203]

Guess so, lol.

Try Grammarly

[ffx]

Well, i got some motivation so now i can continue the story, despite its still break time 

Edited August 22, 2021 by ffx

[ffx]

Well i lost a epsode of project chaos because i click the next unread topic button , next day i will make it again

Edited August 25, 2021 by ffx

[Vagrant203]

Don't force yourself if you're not having fun with it.

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Episode 4: Rocket Ram
 

Spoiler

*While Gus and Eve are gunning the enemy, Jeb and Linus are in the VAB*
Jeb: Why im here?, im at the SPH before the wormhole
Linus: This is strange, you sholdn't be here lol
Jeb: We need to do something to fight the enemy
Linus: Hehehehehehe, i have a idea 
*After a while*

Linus: Im going to make this rocket collide and destroy the targeted enemy
Jeb: HELLYAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Linus: Yes Jeb, very kerbal way of killing enemies. Time to launch this boy out
*After rolling it out to the launch*

Linus: Looks like a good day to commit RPD (Rapid Planned Disassembly)
Linus: 
Jeb: 
Linus: T-3......T-2......T-1...... AND LIFTOFF!

Jeb: Whats the target?
Linus: THE VAB!
Jeb: LETS GOOO!

Linus: HIT! Jeb, check if there is a hole somewhere in the VAB
Jeb: Yeah there is one
Linus: Time to destroy some enemies 
And thus episode 4 ended

 

Edited August 26, 2021 by ffx