The Ever-Morphing Sentence Game!

[Maria Sirona]

22 hours ago, Bej Kerman said:

Sentences only being allowed to be edited three times makes for a rather meh game in my opinion. I think it'd be actually interesting if edits were unlimited and we could see how many sentences we could create just by slowly changing the initial sentence, as this otherwise just creates a topic consisting of random sentences that ultimately go nowhere. The topic is called "ever-morphing sentence" and not "slightly morphing sentence to be reset in a couple posts", after all. So, here's my more interesting take on the idea.

 

Ok, here’s how it works: I start with a sentence, then the next person changes a word in the sentence, and then the next person does the same thing, and so on. Don’t start your own sentences - the new sentence must be the previous one with a word changed. The sentence can have a total of three words changed in one post, but you must show these iterations, as shown below:

"The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog" (0)

"The quick brown fox rolls over the lazy dog" (1)

"The quick brown fox rolls from the lazy dog" (2)

"The quick brown fox rolls from the smelly dog" (3)

The next person may continue, etc.

The numbers after the post signify the number of edits the sentence has had. Just for convenience, not a requirement.

This is just a take on the original game and not a jab at it. I just personally think the rules OP set greatly limit how much fun we can have with the game. Take it as you wish.

Bruh @Catto

The figgiest sprocket is three hundred meters löng (15)

[Bej Kerman]

The tiniest sprocket is three hundred meters löng (16)

[Deddly]

The tiniest sprocket is three hundred meters away (17)

Edited June 2, 2022 by Deddly
17!

[Maria Sirona]

The tiniest kerbal is three hundred meters away (15)

Edited June 2, 2022 by Maria Sirona

[Nazalassa]

The tiniest kerbal is three meters away (19)

Edited June 2, 2022 by Nazalassa
ninja'd

[Deddly]

The tiniest kerbal is three meters away from

(20)

[Maria Sirona]

The tiniest kerbal is three meters away from rocket (21)

[Deddly]

The tiniest kerbal is three meters away from my rocket (22)

[Zozaf Kerman]

The largest kerbal is three meters away from my rocket.(23) 

Edited June 2, 2022 by Zozaf Kerman

[Catto]

The largest man is three meters away from my rocket. (24)

(Okay, i originally made this game, so i make the rules. The sentence will reset after (25) and whoever's first to make the new sentence makes the new sentence.)

Edited June 2, 2022 by Catto

[Deddly]

The largest man is three metres away from my rocket. (25)

Spoiler

@Catto, this is @Zozaf Kerman's thread.

 

[Catto]

1 hour ago, Deddly said:

@Catto, this is @Zozaf Kerman's thread.

On 3/21/2022 at 4:28 PM, Zozaf Kerman said:

Credit to @Catto for the original idea.

I'm sorry.. but... I made the post first and zozaf has kindly remade it with my permission.

But it's fine. i'll let him make the rules

[ColdJ]

( I was fine with the sentence being edited more times but now you have started adding extra words, this could end up quite large.)

The pie man is three metres away from my rocket. (26)

@Catto. Game threads tend to morph into whatever keeps them interesting. I wouldn't take it personally. Just Look at "King of the Hill" or "Steal the Cookie". They haven't looked like the original set out for ages.

Edited June 2, 2022 by ColdJ

[Deddly]

16 minutes ago, Catto said:

I'm sorry.. but... I made the post first and zozaf has kindly remade it with my permission.

But it's fine. i'll let him make the rules

Whatever you guys decide on. I'm not posting here as a moderator 

[Zozaf Kerman]

I’ll think of something tomorrow when i wake up.

[Maria Sirona]

The pie man is three meters away eating my rocket (27)

[ColdJ]

The pie man is three meters away eating my donut (28)

[Maria Sirona]

The straw man is three meters away eating my donut (29)

[ColdJ]

The straw man got three meters away eating my donut (30)

[Deddly]

The straw man got three metres away eating my donut (31)

Spoiler

Oi, no changing the Euro spelling without using your turn to do it  

 

[ColdJ]

10 minutes ago, Deddly said:

Oi, no changing the Euro spelling without using your turn to do it  

Spoiler

Hadn't realised that Maria had changed it till you mentioned it.

The straw man got three microns away eating my donut (32)

[Zozaf Kerman]

I’ll make a 30 edit sentence limit, and we’ll say this is the thirstiest one.

The claw man got three microns away eating my donut. (33) and final.

Whoever’s next, please start with a short sentence.

[Nazalassa]

This thread has emerged from the graveyard. (0)

[Maria Sirona]

10 minutes ago, Zozaf Kerman said:

I’ll make a 30 edit sentence limit, and we’ll say this is the thirstiest one.

The claw man got three microns away eating my donut. (33) and final.

Whoever’s next, please start with a short sentence.

So the thread's title is worthless

[Zozaf Kerman]

I have to find a way to keep the balance between boredom and confusion. If you have a better idea, please tell me so that I can fix this.

This thread has flown up from the graveyard.(1)