The Story of Jake Kermin

[halo2austin]

A short story by Austin Smith based on Kerbal Space Program. My name is Jake Kermin I fly Rockets to the moon and to other planets. Today is my first flight of the year and I feel good about it, like anything could go wrong. The ship I am flying today is the Kitty Cat Mark II, I must say its a nice ship. This trip I am going alone, the capsule on the ship only fits one man. 30 seconds after lift off I am in the orbit I set my nose to point the north pole towards the mun. I must say Kerbin is a nice planet its sad that Kerbin Space Centre is the the only buildings for miles on in. 2 hours after take off. I check my map on where I am going, "WHAT THIS CANT BE! I am going to escape the orbit of Kerbin." It seems everything has gone wrong. 3 hours after take off. "I am orbiting the sun right now and it seems I am out of fuel and RCS there is no way back home." 2 years later. "Seems they have forgotten about me. You know what I am going to hang on to my later on the outside of my ship." 2 years later. "No no no no I lost my grip must reach pod." Ah no use I guess I stuck in space forever now. That is the story of Jake Kermin. (Yes this actually did happen to me in the game)

[swiftgates24]

Nice Kitty Cat Mark II, that is too good.

[LaydeeDem]

Third grade quality. It is very quick and doesn't have a very well thought out plot. It is very hard to read.

Please read books. It really helps with writing.

[halo2austin]

Third grade quality. It is very quick and doesn't have a very well thought out plot. It is very hard to read.

Please read books. It really helps with writing.

Third grade quality in my mind is little or no punctuation,no capitals and bad spelling

[LaydeeDem]

Perhaps that was a poor remark to make. But the point still stands:

Read books. That is the best way to get better at writing.

[halo2austin]

I do read books. And i am also pointing out that one more post and you got 1000

[The Destroyer]

Honsently, it be nice if:

A: Spaced out

B: More storyline, like thats not a story, its just a little adventure

[LaydeeDem]

Honsently, it be nice if:

A: Spaced out

B: More storyline, like thats not a story, its just a little adventure

I agree there is no real story. Most stories have a beginning, middle, and end.

I'm starting to sound like an English teacher.