Voyage To Planet NX GG 1667

[ninjakids]

Please, I beg of you, MAKE CHAPTER 9!

[Mr. Pseudonym]

Good story, but the punctuation could be better. Perhaps you could let someone help you with punctuation and the like?

[CCKinnison]

Nice idea... should be interesting to see what happens next.

[Mr. Pseudonym]

Please make chapter 9! This is really good!

[Voyager55]

Sorry for the long wait guys,i'm working on chapter 9 right now.

EDIT= Part 9 is up

Edited July 12, 2013 by Voyager55

[Itsdavyjones]

Ohh man, that was good, but short, hurry up with chapter ten

[ramnrmeul]

C'mon, Voyager! More content!

[Voyager55]

Chapter 10 is up,sorry for the briefness.

[Itsdavyjones]

Brief maybe, but still decent. Is understandable that the human would take a picture, and maybe he didn't see a kerbal got sucked out.

[Mr. Pseudonym]

Keep up the good work! Though you should get an editor or something. It would make your writing look a little neater.

[ramnrmeul]

C'mon Voyager, get a new post up.

[Voyager55]

Does anyone still want me to continue this series? I'll try to be less lazy with my grammar (Only a bit x3) I've been considering continuing it if anyone still actually cares.

[KSK]

Does anyone still want me to continue this series? I'll try to be less lazy with my grammar (Only a bit x3) I've been considering continuing it if anyone still actually cares.

Go for it! I'd be happy to see this tale come out of hibernation.

[Skyro]

I think that you definitely should continue this...it's really good and I enjoyed reading it!

[Voyager55]

Thanks guys, i'm still amazed that people actually enjoyed this haha. I'm going to try to be a little more organized this go around, grammatically and plot wise. Stay tuned, thank you.

Edited September 14, 2014 by Voyager55

[ub43]

Gizoogle.net

put the story into the translator XD

[Kerboman]

I could edit for you, make the grammar a bit better before you post it

[Voyager55]

Gizoogle.net

put the story into the translator XD

Oh my God that made my day! I think the grammar actually improved somehow xD