The last part where it goes dramatic in the song was perfect timing. Got to the last line where it says the architect of your dissolution and the song going duhh duhh duhh. Brilliant :) :)
Basically it was a space battle in orbit of Kerbin and Lengis destroyed the mechani-Kraken and nearly died in the process. For a full story go to the outreach series. My question is will Jeb go down to Eeloo or not?
Two things: Firstly I laughed when jeb told bill not to worry about the fusion rocket Secondly I can barley see the lasers on the ship. I got confused when Jeb talked about them.
Great so far. I can see why you said you had trouble with this story with sending two ships. Are the other two like failures or something that actually occurred or did you just add that to the story?