(Poetry)

[cratercracker]

Bright high sun…

Rotten surface…

And deep craters..

But it is time to leave now

From this fried brown planet

The Moho

 

 

 

 

Deep oceans  ,craters

Those heavy rainy clouds

And infinite flatlands around

Still standing still un explored

The magnificent purple planet

That pulling eyes to be watched

The Eve

 

 

The great blue dot

Fading In green of the trees

The oceans full of water and ice

Which are standing by to be crossed

The Kerbin

 

 

Distant wander point

Full of dread and red

Watching victims of pull to be faint

Great wisdom of dead

Tracing pale steps of remains…

The Duna

Yeah im bad at poetry...But hey its an a attempt and im  Russian  and im very bad at english!

Edited January 30, 2017 by cratercracker

[KSK]

I like it. Are you going to do Jool and its muns, Eeloo and (whispers)...Dres too?

The last line of each verse might read better without the definite article (e.g. just 'Moho' rather than 'The Moho' but on the other hand they're a little bit quirky, a little bit different as they are. Not sure whether I'd change them actually. There's a couple of other lines which I think have lost something in translation - or maybe I just suck at reading poetry - but apart from that a fine effort!