WOW! This was such a riveting story! I know it's just Kerbal Space Program, but I legitimately LOVED the story! I seriously cannot wait for the whole thing! Also, have you considered greatly expanding upon your story? Like say, the USKK and the CKFN are in a race for Duna and eventually discover that there is a possibly habitable world orbiting Jool, and both nations enter a space race that dwarfs the post-Kold War race?