Feedback Requested: Spacetime Oddity

[Tex]

Hey all. So I'm sure a few of you have read my mission report I started a couple months ago:

A Spacetime Oddity: My Kerbal Space Program.

I'm posting this thread because with 1.0, so to will an updated version of the Oddity, and because everything is going to be changing it really will be truer to the purpose of my mission report than the first Oddity was: playing KSP and learning about what makes the game tick.

And so, I'm asking those who have read it before, or who haven't read it but would like to help, I would like some feedback so I can make Oddity II even better than the first.

Some changes I plan to make:

• MOAR photos!
  
• Some added videos
  
• Better data collection
  
• A splash of extra humor
  

So beyond these points, does anybody else have any suggestions? What do you like about it and what can I fix?