Plane Evasion

[kenbobo]

I made a game! Yes! And it's just reached the first paid version!

Come and buy it here!

[BagelRabbit]

I made a game! Yes! And it's just reached the first paid version!

Come and buy it here!

Hello kenbob5588!

While I respect your commitment to making games, I think there are some things you should do if you want people to purchase 'Plane Evasion.'

First off, I would love to see some pictures or a video. Your only picture seems to be on your website, and even then it's tiny and not all that descriptive. Give us some large screenshots that really show us what is in the game.

(Also, you already have a YouTube channel... why don't you take the opportunity to post a video on there? That would also be great.)

Second, you need to tell us exactly what's in this game and what it has to offer. There could be some thrilling gameplay: the name "Plane Evasion" sounds like fun. But unless you actually give a sense of what is in the game, we won't know what to expect. Really try to show off your product! What does it do that no other game does? What makes it worth $3?

If you do these two things and the game really looks like fun, you'll probably get a lot more downloads. Give it some thought, okay?

-Upsilon

[Kinglet]

Sorry if this sounds harsh, but I do not think this game is complete enough to be sold as a paid version.

Edit: Found a earlier thread on it: http://forum.kerbalspaceprogram.com/threads/114738-Made-another-one%21?highlight=Plane+evasion

Edited May 6, 2015 by Kinglet

[kenbobo]

Sorry if this sounds harsh, but I do not think this game is complete enough to be sold as a paid version.

It's fine. Criticism is welcome. It's the biggest update with water and improved flight physics... and if i want to get serious I need to have paid employees...

First off, I would love to see some pictures or a video. Your only picture seems to be on your website, and even then it's tiny and not all that descriptive. Give us some large screenshots that really show us what is in the game.

(Also, you already have a YouTube channel... why don't you take the opportunity to post a video on there? That would also be great.)

Second, you need to tell us exactly what's in this game and what it has to offer. There could be some thrilling gameplay: the name "Plane Evasion" sounds like fun. But unless you actually give a sense of what is in the game, we won't know what to expect. Really try to show off your product! What does it do that no other game does? What makes it worth $3?

1. Not an option, as I'm not at a great wifi signal right now.

2. A jet starts of on a flying carrier with engines on full, the engines roaring, it accelerates to takeoff speed. With 2 mountain ranges, there's quite a thrill of maneuvering. (also created after 5 hours of hard labor by an 11 year old, a child developer is kinda important nowadays)

[The Destroyer]

Hello kenbob5588!

While I respect your commitment to making games, I think there are some things you should do if you want people to purchase 'Plane Evasion.'

First off, I would love to see some pictures or a video. Your only picture seems to be on your website, and even then it's tiny and not all that descriptive. Give us some large screenshots that really show us what is in the game.

(Also, you already have a YouTube channel... why don't you take the opportunity to post a video on there? That would also be great.)

Second, you need to tell us exactly what's in this game and what it has to offer. There could be some thrilling gameplay: the name "Plane Evasion" sounds like fun. But unless you actually give a sense of what is in the game, we won't know what to expect. Really try to show off your product! What does it do that no other game does? What makes it worth $3?

If you do these two things and the game really looks like fun, you'll probably get a lot more downloads. Give it some thought, okay?

-Upsilon

I totally agree with this. It needs much more work, and video, to really become a paid game. For instance, Air Brawl is still free and that has a lot of content, and it works very well. It is going paid, but the game and maps are well worth it

After reading your post above, paid employees? I know you're young, but still, if you commit a month of good devloping and learn things such as making your own models, it will be hard, but still, then you will truly have a game if you work hard.

Not having the best Wifi dosen't matter for video/pictures, take some, upload it to the website- let your computer upload it for the day if you have to, it will entice people to buy it.

Edited May 6, 2015 by The Destroyer