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[COMPLETE] Retouched RankAmateur webcomic intro page


RedDwarfIV

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The original image:

http://rankamateur.thecomicseries.com/images/comics/53/e22ac18860cab7d736d2f045032403d11505448472.png

And Kerbalnaut, this is the introduction page to my webcomic. Its a sci-fi. The character giving the introduction is Felix. The first few panels make him look creepy, then suddenly your looking at something which does not look like it could have stabbed someone recently. He\'s a feline Genetically Engineered Life Form. The layman\'s term would be anthro/furry. He is a main character, but most of the main characters are aliens, not furries, and there is one Human tagging along.

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I know but, bar fight? Not hit by debris? Maybe its just me, but its kinda weird.

The tagline is \'somehow a bar fight ends up a threat to the galaxy.\'

SPOILERS:

Basically, this Stingray Lander class ship has been sent on crowd control duty to a Pleasure Cruiser. As they are heading there by hyperdrive, they are hit by debris and forced back into normal space. Settling in for repairs, they come across a Horizon class skiff called Perigee. Its only occupant is dimensional engineer, Hannah Teal, who seems to be having a hard time staying \'with it\'. You later find out that this is because she is a member of United Against Matter Transferrers, who had been put through a Matter Transferrer and is now having an identity crisis.

Because the crew meet this dimensional engineer, a series of events kick of resulting in Sekhmet [a malevolent cat the size of a three storey building, with the psychic ability to influence Humans to boot] getting her paws on the plans on Professor Teal\'s own designs for a \'dimension gun\' that causes \'catastrophic universal neutralisation of timestream\', a fact that the crew is aware of through Felix, the character in the intro, who turns out to be an unwitting sleeper agent.

It then becomes a race to prevent the \'dimension gun\' being fired.

So there you go. If the ship hadn\'t been hit by debris in flight, none of that would have happened.

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I like the shading and the nice smooth style. Nice improvement. By the way, the link you posted to the old comic seems to be 404\'d.

Oh well. I don\'t think I have any other links to it. Suffice to say, there was no shading, or antialiasing and the drawing itself wasn\'t very good.

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