ThatGuyWithALongUsername Posted January 31, 2016 Share Posted January 31, 2016 (edited) THE JOURNEYS OF THE RAUMZUG Introduction Jebediah Kerman looked up at the monstrosity before him. Obviously, he knew he could fly this ship. Mission control was, at most, hopeful that he was right. The rather large nuclear mothership would be the pinnacle of the space program, but of course Jedediah Kerman didn't care. The first mission was repurposing an old station. Its purpose was to refuel outbound planetary ships for the many, many previous cancelled/crashed/krakened interplanetary missions. Of course, the engineers eventually discovered how inefficient the design was, as it would refine ore from passing asteroids. So they decided that moving it to minmus was a good test mission for the Raumzug. Valentina, the copilot, was not looking forward to this trip. She always tried to stay happy, but she really, really hated Jebediah. "Comms are GO!" yelled Gene. Jebediah found this extremely boring. "SAS is- um, did he just take off?" Bob, who Jeb almost forgot was there, started screaming. CHAPTER INDEX: none yet. So, what do you think? Edited March 7, 2016 by ThatGuyWithALongUsername Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geschosskopf Posted February 2, 2016 Share Posted February 2, 2016 On 1/31/2016 at 5:50 PM, ThatGuyWithALongUsername said: So, what do you think? Well, it's a nice-looking beast. Where's it going and why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatGuyWithALongUsername Posted February 3, 2016 Author Share Posted February 3, 2016 On 2/2/2016 at 9:23 PM, Geschosskopf said: Well, it's a nice-looking beast. Where's it going and why? Uhh... to space? BECAUSE SCIENCE! I know where it's going, but I'm not sure if it's going there. I wrote this late at night so it was written badly, so I might not continue it. Not sure how to actually continue this anyway. Maybe I should rewrite the intro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatGuyWithALongUsername Posted March 5, 2016 Author Share Posted March 5, 2016 Well, I rewrote the intro. There. Should be at least a bit less terrible now. So, what do think this time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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