The QBE

[TheDataMiner]

Year: 2020

It was a beautiful night on Earth, Will Jones looked up into the stars and stared, all his life he had been fascinated by these dots of light in the sky, wondering, if someone else was staring back at him, if there anyone else out there. Suddenly he saw a glowing dot in the sky" Martha, come out here, look at this" he said."Just a minute!"came the reply. As he peered at it The dot got bigger,and brighter, and closer! Suddenly the ground exploded and he was thrown back onto the wall. "What just happened", he whispered as the dust settled. He looked around to see what could have done this." A crater,on my lawn" he exclaimed; as he rushed to the sight of the impact. In the dirt, a shiny object caught his eye."Was that what caused this?" he wondered; as he began to scrape away the debris. His fingers hit hard metal and he recoiled from the heat. But he kept digging on his hands and knees to find what this could be.finally, he pulled out a large cube, it's sides were charred but writing was still visible on the side, he looked closer; "Probodobodyne QBE" he read aloud, "What is this?" he thought "And where did it come from?"

Chapter 2

Meanwhile, on Kerbin.

"Jeb,Jeb!" Lewis exclaimed, running down the hall. He rounded the corner and, splat, he crashed into Jeb, spilling his coffee all over the front of his shirt. "This had better be good, intern" Jeb said gritting his teeth."s...sorry sir, but I think you should see this, in control room 4." " The venturer probe!" Jeb interrupted and rushed into the room. All of the KSP executives were already there as Jeb ran in; gasping for breath he asked " What's happening he..." Onscreen was a kerbaloid figure staring into the camera. "What is this thing," The man asked. Jeb looked to the mission director" could this be.." " Yes, first contact"

To be continued...

What do you think, suggestions and criticism welcome.

Edited June 30, 2013 by TheDataMiner
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[ninjakids]

Nice! Just use CAPTIOLS in the begining of people's words.

[TheDataMiner]

Chapter 2 up.