KSP - Distress Call - Episode I

[Kuba Kuzman]

Hello everyone Feel free to leave any comments or suggestions! I look forward to your responses

Edited September 17, 2013 by Kuba Kuzman

[Bobhendly]

To he honest.. The intro needs a tad bit of work... The Music is WAY Overhyped for a simple entering scene.. Perhaps something more serene wouldve done? I feel like its a space battle.. Without the you know, "Battle" Part. The music tone at 04:14 wouldve done will for the beginning.... And, All of this to GO To DUNA? I believe you need a plot helper or writer.. (I couldnt possibly mean me!)

I would love a writing Inspiration!

Edited September 17, 2013 by Bobhendly
I like cheese.

[Bobhendly]

Good visuals on ship design, though.. Like the glowy sci fci greebles.

[Bobhendly]

I would love a PM. Your video talents could bring plotlines to life.

[Bobhendly]

..Also.. The crash is a tad silly...

[Bobhendly]

Rating 1 - 10... Oh dear.. I want to help and work with you. I have ALWAYS Have had storylines in my head

[Bobhendly]

(The rating is 6/10)

Plot is nonexistent.

Ship design is pretty, but slightly unrealistic.

Music.. Overdone, at best.

[Bobhendly]

The Good bits:

I like what you did with the wording.

The title "Distress call" Is rather nice.. Good plots flow as we speak.

The ship design is nice and glowy.. Me liek. But it needs to LOOK Like it can aerobrake.

[Bobhendly]

I should not have spread these posts so far.. But I wrote as i thought,