My First Cinematic, Kurt Kerman

[AlexBrown]

My First Cinematic Ever in any game, it may be bad but feedback would be appreciated.

Sincerely Alex Brown

[keanukeno21]

Not Bad! , i suggest that you buy fraps, so you can have better quality on the video

[Lohan2008]

/Grammar Nazi:

successful, confirmed,

it is "burn" with quotation marks

[KSK]

First off - nice job for a first cinematic!

I've never tried making one myself and don't have any feel for what's involved - so take my comments accordingly! That said, could you put in the dialogue as subtitles rather than cutting away to a text screen each time? It works quite well to set the mood but breaks the immersion after that. Also, as Lohan said - running a spellchecker over the script would be good too

[The Destroyer]

I agree with KSK.

It reminds me of my old KSP videos/cinematics.

Let me find one...