Story time!

[Spacecats!]

Allright, I\'m making a story, and I\'m doing good so far. However, I usually get bored halfway through. It would be great to have your support!

The Tale of Two Tyrants

Prologue

18:22:44, November 5, 2011

The two men entered the courtroom, preparing their last words. Already, they could taste the smoke in the air. Judge Hamilton stated across the crowded, uncomfortable courtroom; 'Order, order in the court!' with his raspy, ditinguishable voice. The men sat down, giving nothing away more than the sound of their breath and the squeak of their chairs. The man on the left goes up first, wearing a grey suit and dark sunglasses. His hair is wet, and his nose bloody.

He began to speak: 'Your honor, in May, we had gone on a killing spree. In June, we had gone on-' The judge immediately cut him off; 'So, you admit it?' The man continued, 'Your honor, I\'m about to start another spree in here, and it won\'t be pretty. Capeesh?' The judge allowed him to continue. 'We had gone on many a spree. May that spree be mugging, may that spree be murder. Either wa-'

He was cut off when a flashbang went off in the crowded courtroom. 'Run! Get to the Vegas!' the man in the brown suit yelled. They both bolted to the doors, shaking as their revolvers went off. 'What now?!' yelled the man in grey, as he jumped into the Vegas\' doors. 'What do you think?' came the reply.

The Vegas sped down the busy street, dodging cars, trucks and policemen alike. 'Put the gun down, park the car and maybe we can tal-' were the last words of one naïve officer, who\'s brains were splattered across the asphalt. Suddenly, the Vegas lost control, and sup out, flipping this way and that, spinning uncontrollably. The last words the man in grey heard were 'Oh god, he was ripped in half! Get this man an ambulance, now!'

What do you think?