Kerbal rising - A tale of the kerbal race rising

[Bearsh]

A few million years ago the big bang happened, Forming the kerbol system... And the kerbal race.

The kerbals knew why they were here... To rise as a species. So these are the tales and the journeys of the kerbals rising.

Chapter One: Kerbals Rising

Kerbin was young, The kerbals were younger. They're numbers small. They wondered how they would start, One kerbal caught something in their eye sparkling and green! He ran over to it and picked it up, It was kethane! Though the kerbals didn't know that. He gave it to one of the kerbals and the others circled around him, Wondering. What is this majestic shiny material? And how would they find out what it was even? One kerbal sayed they may know somehow! The kerbals asked in disbelief, How would you know? As far as we know were the only ones in this galaxy! The kerbal sayed "Come i saw something over there!" The kerbals ran following him... There stood, stuck in a hole... There we're ancient scriptures, In an ancient language the kerbals yet to understand! One kerbal sayed they think that those scriptures came from our ancestors! The kerbalens. On a planet somewhere... The kerbals gasped in disbelief! The kerbal then sayed he thinks he knows what it says, He read on... "We have reached our ending... A more knowledgable and capable species will take on the kerbal race to glory... Whoever you are, You must build a space center!" The kerbals gasped in disbelief! Was this true? Was this the start of a destiny for kerbalkind?

The kerbal said, We must build a space center! The other kerbals agreed confidently!

So they searched for stuff that could work to build the space center, One of the kerbals found a very silver and shiney material, It was metal. They named it. The dug down more finding a whole deposit of metal! Big enough to build a VAB (Although they didn't know it was a VAB!) They hastily dug the metal out and started building a building! Once it was done in a few days, They didn't know what to call it... They scratched their heads, Think, think, Think! They said what would be in a space center! One of them hastily yelled and raised their hand! And said... Maybe we could call it a tracking station! They all yelled agreeing Yes! So they stayed up all night trying to get a working sattellite, It was harder than they thought! It would take longer than a day to make a sattellite!

So the next day... They we're exhausted from a night of working! So they all setup some tents with sticks and cloth, And a simple cloth bed. They slept that day, Then they woke up well wide awake and were ready to get working again! One of the kerbals, Jebediah's cousin Jake Kerman, Said..."Will we be able to create a Space Center?" Jake's friend sayed "Sure we will, it's not we have to it's that its our destiny!" Those words re-assured jake, It put a grin on his face.

But the kerbals had a strange feeling in there stomachs... They we're hungry! So what would they eat? The searched for something that looked edible, They found a tree with a red thing... (An apple but they did not know it!) one kerbal helped the other kerbal grab it by standing on their shoulders, Being the small beings that they are. One of them found a sharp stick and washed it with some water then cutted the apple into tiny half's then they each ate one of the half's, The felt better but they had to find some more, But not now! Now they had to get working on the space center!

So they went back to their mining hole, Then grabbed some metal with his brothers also grabbing metal then they ran outside and started working on a tall new building, This building took longer than the tracking station! After about 6 months, Almost a year they managed to create the VAB! They all thought in a group... What should we call this one of them yelled VAB Vehicle assembly building! The group yelled yes! Perfection! All of this was very overwhelming to the kerbals, What did this mean? Why are we doing this? They soon will find out.

After finding tons of apples they stored them in the undergound metal mine, In ice they found so it would cyrostasis the apples preserving them!

(That was not the most real life accurate sentence in the world, I'm being creative alright leave out the cyrostasis with ice isn't possible comments!)

So then the kerbals ran out of metal, They kept digging and luckily found alot of metal, they thought maybe enough to finish the whole space center!

But one question remained... What is that green material, they keep running into it in the mines, when they mined it dust came out, They started thinking it was a mineral, So they kept mining metal and the green materials! After building and bonding the group of kerbals became friend quickly, They're teamwork was swell too!

They then started building the Space plane hangar!

So the year 2, the kerbals were proud of they're accomplishments. But they know that still there's much to be done. So they thought what was a hangar?

They found a picture on the ground showing the kerbalen's hangar. They had a glimpse of what it should be!

The kerbals knew that they had to get to work, Another big building is going to take a while.

So they wondered, If that was the kerbalen's hangar, How do they use it? Was it a door?

So they started working on a few prototypes of doors, One where they would push it open, Or use a vehicle to open it, Until they found some rope and created a prototype when you raise the rope, The door opens! So they built the hangar first, The door should wait.

Once they completed it a few months later they started working on the door, The knew how it had to be made. So once they created it they began trying to fit it on the hangar, It wasen't staying! So they used ropes to make it stay on parts of the hangar while keeping it's mobility!

After they got the hangar door working they saw a triangle looking thing, It was a spaceplane.

The kerbals knew that this meant something, They didn't know what was in the sky, But they knew it was their destiny to visit it!

I'm thinking of more ideas and getting pictures for chapter 2! So it should be here later today or tommorrow.

Edited April 25, 2014 by Bearsh

[KSK]

Hope you don't mind me commenting here but there are a couple of things you could do to make this easier to read.

1. Use fewer exclamation marks. They! make the text! very jerky to read!

2. Sometimes you're mixing up they're, there and their.

There - indicates position, as in 'that rock over there'.

Their - indicates possession, as in 'Kerbin was young, The kerbals were younger. Their numbers small.

They're - short for 'they are'. For example - 'The kerbals are mining. They're digging for metal.'

3. You're also mixing up 'were' and 'we're'

We're - short for 'we are' For example, 'Hey guys - what are you doing? Oh - we're just building a space centre!'

Were - not sure how best to describe this so here's an example. 'There stood, stuck in a hole... There were ancient scriptures.'

4. Past tense of 'say' is 'said' not 'sayed'

Good luck with the rest of the story!

[Bearsh]

Hope you don't mind me commenting here but there are a couple of things you could do to make this easier to read.

1. Use fewer exclamation marks. They! make the text! very jerky to read!

2. Sometimes you're mixing up they're, there and their.

There - indicates position, as in 'that rock over there'.

Their - indicates possession, as in 'Kerbin was young, The kerbals were younger. Their numbers small.

They're - short for 'they are'. For example - 'The kerbals are mining. They're digging for metal.'

3. You're also mixing up 'were' and 'we're'

We're - short for 'we are' For example, 'Hey guys - what are you doing? Oh - we're just building a space centre!'

Were - not sure how best to describe this so here's an example. 'There stood, stuck in a hole... There were ancient scriptures.'

4. Past tense of 'say' is 'said' not 'sayed'

Good luck with the rest of the story!

Thanks for commenting i was beginning to think noone liked it, I'm not to good with some words so i try my best, especially we're and were i always mix them up. I just did the ! to show like Yelling or you know.

[KSK]

Thanks for commenting i was beginning to think noone liked it, I'm not to good with some words so i try my best, especially we're and were i always mix them up. I just did the ! to show like Yelling or you know.

Oh I get that and I actually quite like your hyperactive kerbals. If you use too many exclamation marks though, it's a bit like writing everything IN CAPITAL LETTERS.

[Bearsh]

Oh I get that and I actually quite like your hyperactive kerbals. If you use too many exclamation marks though, it's a bit like writing everything IN CAPITAL LETTERS.

Oh yeah hahaha, k.