The Menace Within

[Zaptrip2]

Hello visitor! On this thread you will find The Menace Within a fan-fiction based off fan-fiction. I decided to combine the worlds of Macey Dean and Enter Elysium, as well as a 1984 feel. I have nothing but respect for these Youtubers, and if they ask for this thread to be taken down I will do so immediately. The links to their channels are:

Enter Elysium: https://www.youtube.com/user/EnterElysium

Macey Dean: https://www.youtube.com/user/MaceyDean

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Prologue Part 1: A Cry in the Dark

FILE: X-23

RECOVERD IN HOUSE RAID:

#268034B

CATGORISED AS:

REBEL PROPOGANDA

TO BE:

USED IN TREASON CASE AGAINST BOB KERMAN, THEN DESTROYED

LONG LIVE JEBIDIAH

LONG LIVE THE ELYSIUM

I was never much of a writer. My talent, or lack thereof, will not do this document any favors, it’s hard enough to believe already. But it someone reads this, and actually can see past the lies that are stuffed down your throat every waking second of the day, please share it. That is our only hope. Hope, now that’s a funny word. Something we need more of these days.

To Whom It May Concern:

My name is Bob Kerman, and I am a survivor. I am a survivor of the Elysium chemicals attacks, the SpiritWolf death squads, the Jebidiah purges, and I’m about to throw it all away. The truth must be told.

I’ll lay out the heavy hitters first. It’s all a lie. The whole “SpiritWolf are the good guys,†and “The Elysium Empire is uniting the nations against MechJeb.†Utter kulls**t. They tell it to you every day, and that’s why it’s palatable. People have simply forgotten the actual past, and replaced it with their past. Oh yes, Styx launched the first nukes at the Elysium Empire, but that was AFTER the EE poisoned the Styx water supply and killed millions of children to “demoralize the enemy.†And of course Handland pilots fought to the death and rammed Spiritwolf ships instead of surrender. Maybe they where thinking of their loved ones back on Kerbin, choking on SpiritWolf nerve gas. It’s all lies. The combat footage? HA! More like good CGI. And the extensive writing about the greatness of Jeb? No more then propaganda written by blind fanatics.

Hell, they even say that I was a SpiritWolf pilot. I could never fall that low.

So your probably wondering how Kerbin is now? Well the old NAT is now the “NO-GO†zone. It, and most of the northern hemisphere are radioactive ash; burnt by MechJeb bots while the Empire cowered in bunkers. I’ve heard that Elysium City is nice; it’s protected by an energy shield to keep rabble like me out, and the wealthy in. Styx is a mess, after the water poisoning their population never recovered. They are certainly “demoralizedâ€Â. I’ll just sum it up, or else we’ll be here for hours. The north is a radioactive wasteland, any country outside of the Elysium Union is the scene of never ending war over the few resources left, all celestial bodies besides Kerbal, the Mun, and Minmus are in MechJeb control, and all organized resistance from Hanland has come to an end. Not the rolling grassland and the snow capped mountains that they show you in the sims huh?

And the space program. Oh how the mighty have fallen. All they do is design ICBMs now, or orbital bombardment stations. Technically Jeb is still the CO. I used to know Jeb, back before… They’re coming. I don’t know how they figured out I was writing this so fast. I’m going to hide the letter; hopefully they miss it in the search. Remember, it’s all lies that they feed you. Trust nobody, and keep the hope alive. That’s our only chance.

Fight On,

Lt. Bob Kerman, NAT Navy

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Sounds like an interesting concept, I will keep my eyes peeled for more.

[Zaptrip2]

I'm sorry but this thread is cancelled. I had big plans for the series but do to recent events I simply do not have the time to continue it. Maybe I can come back some other time to finish it!

[KSK]

I'm sorry but this thread is cancelled. I had big plans for the series but do to recent events I simply do not have the time to continue it. Maybe I can come back some other time to finish it!

Sorry to hear that but yeah - life just gets in the way sometimes. Hope you do come back to finish it - the first chapter looked really good.