Missing.

[qwertyx2y]

Missing.

A KSP FanWork.

Chapter-1 A Spectacular Honour

This was the greatest honour a Kerbal could receive. Who would have thought that he would have been picked to lead the formation for the Kerbin City Grand Remembrance day celebration in his Vulcan strategic bomber alongside his friend and co-pilot Kendread Kerman and Navigator Bobdoe Kerman.

Sidvis slumped back into the seat and grinned, if only Jeb, his mentor could have seen this moment but unfortunately two years ago Jeb was killed in a freak training crash in his trusty Aries 3A in full view of his trainee class and Sidvis crew. Sidvis had taken over all of Jebs duty's and was quite happy to finally lead this formation of the latest military aircraft. "Five minutes left until rendezvous Skipper" said Bobdoe from underneath the flight deck ,Sidvis Cheerfully replied "Good I'd like to have someone else to talk t..." his sentence was cut short by a large explosion and a horrific whine, they had been hit. "We lost engine one, bird strike, looked like an albatross." Kendread Shouted "Bulls*** the albatross has been grounded for years now" screamed Sidvis Jokingly, Kendread chuckled back as he struggled with the control column of the crippled bomber Sidvis heard Bobdoe yell something about an over speed in engine 2 over the rattling airframe, and a small fire in the rear fuel tanks but his thoughts where cut short as the aircraft detonated.

Sidvis woke up, falling was a strange feeling, especially when the aircraft was inverted, wait what? inverted? Sidvis reached for the controls and realised there where flames all around him, Sidvis Yelled frantically "WE'RE ON FIRE EJECT!" He Looked up towards the ejection hatch and realised it was blocked, he yanked on the controls and tried pulling the nose up out of its nosedive, and checked for his crew, Kendread stared back at Sidvis, shocked at something, and Bobdoe was frantically pushing buttons on his control panel trying to work out what was wrong, Sidvis realised someone was screaming and checking his friends again revealed something shocking, it was him who was screaming and he was on fire, the flame licking the cockpit around him, Sidivs stared out of the top hatch at the moon glaring down on him and slumped into the seat, and let the flame overcome him.

Edited July 18, 2014 by qwertyx2y
PARAGRAPHING!

[qwertyx2y]

On hold for a while as I play .24

Meanwhile tell me what you think.

Edited July 18, 2014 by qwertyx2y
adding stuff.

[KSK]

Needs moar paragraphs - it would make it much easier to read. Other than that, it would be good to know what happens next!

[qwertyx2y]

I Guarantee it will different...

Also paragraphs where never my strong point but I edited it to try and fix it.

[KSK]

Cool. Good job fixing the paragraphs too!