The Fleet Master Posted July 27, 2014 Share Posted July 27, 2014 Hello, I'm Scotty. I write Creepypastas in my free time but never publish them because some are rather dark and after recent events I didn't know how everyone would react. This is purely fictional and shouldn't be taken seriously. This is also a rather short story because Creepypastas and Kerbal SPace Program don't really mix well.Hello Kerbal Space Program community, I recently bought the game after the Steam Summer sale. I love it really but I've had some "Experiences". My first few flights went as you'd expect, explosions and screaming. It was kind of funny in a comical sense seeing the explosions for the first three launched but after it began to get annoying. I finally managed to get a suborbital rocket after about nine failed attempts. I was actually happy but that first kerbal was Ludmey Kerman. Jeb, Bill, and Bob all died in my attempts. I tried for an orbital flight after and as you'd expect this took a few tries as I knew the flight profile but of course couldn't build. On a mission I named the "Get the hell to orbit-4" Jeb returned as did Bill and Bob. I was using the standard one Kerbal pod so Jeb went ahead. The launch went off without a hitch, same with booster seperation and jettison of the second stage. I was so happy I was cheering and screaming when I made it to an orbit of 71km by 87km. I looked at the screen to see the sun setting as we entered the dark side but I looked in the corner of the screen where your Kerbal is and saw... Jeb Screaming? I thought to myself "This isn't right, I'm new and I know Jeb isn't supposed to be screaming" When I asked myself why he was screaming out loud the game crashed. I thought "Hmm that's odd, it's like it heard me?". I turned my computer chair to reach for my coffee but I was stopped by a masked man staring in my window. He was wearing one of those Paper Kerbal masks staring into my window and when I blinked he was gone. About three minutes later I started the game back up and when I resumed that flight from orbit I heard a scream upstairs. I ran upstairs only to see my wife dead on the floor with her neck twisted in a way I didn't know possible and blood dripping from her mouth. I looked out the window to see the same masked man staring in with his mask covered in blood. What I'm here to tell you is if you see Jeb screaming don't turn around. Shut your computer down and walk away or you might share my fate. He's coming for me, I know it. I've seen him staring in my window when I'm trying to sleep and when I awake from a nightmare. Jeb's not meant to scream people.I'd really like some critique on my kinda dark writing. Thanks for reading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpaceSphereOfDeath Posted July 27, 2014 Share Posted July 27, 2014 Meh, I think it could use more build up, instead of I thought I saw him, but didn't but then he's really and kills people. I do like the idea of a dead kerbal coming back for revenge, but the writing is sub-par.Still prefer jeb's vision Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Tadpole Posted July 27, 2014 Share Posted July 27, 2014 What SpaceSphereOfDeath said.And you could use more paragraphs. Not everyone likes wall of texts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fleet Master Posted July 27, 2014 Author Share Posted July 27, 2014 Thanks Honestly I wrote this in about 10 minutes at midnight, probably why it's crappy now that I'm reading it :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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