Operation Ruby Sunrise

[DMSP]

What do you guys think of this? Should I make a story behind it? This is the beginning and I have some sort of plot.

It was hot. And yet outside, it was below freezing. I was burnt, we all were. Something had gone wrong… But we had sur- That was all I could think before I felt a massive jolt and blacked-out.

In the pitch blackness over the Geponian Tundra, two objects fell. One got lucky. Its parachutes deployed. The other fell, and nothing stopped it. It smashed into the side of a snow covered hill with a thump and the sound of metal being folded and crumpled filled the air. All the snow nearby was thrown into the sky. Then the object exploded. The snow glistened brightly in the firelight, as the other object bumped into the ground, and then rolled over.

Edited November 5, 2014 by DMSP
K name change!

[KSK]

Six lines isn't a great deal to go on, but they're an interesting six lines, and new writing is always a good thing! So yes - please do make a story out of it.

Personally, I'm not a big fan of 'K' names, so crashing somewhere other than Kiberia would be good. That's just me though - at the end of the day it's your story, so name things as you see fit.

[DMSP]

Actually, I will not write this story... YET. I will get to it but I just need some time to organize the story.

Edited November 5, 2014 by DMSP