I'm Making Videos. Please help.

[MechGaming]

Hey Guys, I'm back on the KSP community, the best in the world. I would like some help on my video

please could you tell me what is good and how I can improve. Thanks!

[MechGaming]

thanks for viewing. leaving a reply with a comment would be much appreciated.

[megatiger78]

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[Kulebron]

What the hell was that?

I didn't get what were you trying to show, except some incomprehensible game action. Got bored after 1 minute. At least you edited it to show the most interesting action. Suggestion:

1) get something substantial to say/show

2) get the viewer interested right from the beginning

You could start with a review of the game. There are plenty of boring reviews, so if you make quick-paced video, this is great for a review. You can try making the viewer want to play this game.

[Weegee]

I agree with Kulebron. The game wasn't explained, and it wasn't a first impressions video so some explanation is necessary. You kept the action moving, but the cuts were too fast and disorienting. It's still boring to watch if it just cuts back and forth between you killing and dying.

I didn't really know what you were doing, and I would have no idea what the game was or why it looked like that if I didn't have prior knowledge about Roblox. I'd also just not play Roblox for a video, really. They can be fun little games to play (with friends especially) but not to watch since the graphics are often un-interesting and they are limited to a small amount of sound effects and music.

[MechGaming]

I agree with Kulebron. The game wasn't explained, and it wasn't a first impressions video so some explanation is necessary. You kept the action moving, but the cuts were too fast and disorienting. It's still boring to watch if it just cuts back and forth between you killing and dying.

I didn't really know what you were doing, and I would have no idea what the game was or why it looked like that if I didn't have prior knowledge about Roblox. I'd also just not play Roblox for a video, really. They can be fun little games to play (with friends especially) but not to watch since the graphics are often un-interesting and they are limited to a small amount of sound effects and music.

What the hell was that?

I didn't get what were you trying to show, except some incomprehensible game action. Got bored after 1 minute. At least you edited it to show the most interesting action. Suggestion:

1) get something substantial to say/show

2) get the viewer interested right from the beginning

You could start with a review of the game. There are plenty of boring reviews, so if you make quick-paced video, this is great for a review. You can try making the viewer want to play this game.

Thanks for the advice guys, better than the Airline Empires forum .

I will definitely take you guys advice into consideration and try to make reviews with the fast editing, and slow down a bit.

[MechGaming]

I have a new one up, I have taken your advice.