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[Writing] My KSP short stories


Anomalous_Matter

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My only criticism would be the the use of Earth based elements such as Mountain Dew. Though I like the idea of giving Jeb a .... (I lack the word, maybe there isn\'t one), but certainly from shows like Star Trek, Picard and Janeway had an association with Earl Grey tea and black coffee respectively.

Again, well written.

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'Did the scientists install that experimental new afterburner I told them about?' Jeb asked.

'I\'m not going to answer that question,' Bill replied, looking away.

'You just did'

Slightly plagiarized.

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