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Maby they thought it was for a cause? But this is true.

Ok

Ah. What about my Plot didn't you like I'm just curious.

What's that?

What's that

@DDE what didn't you like about my alternative plot

Star Wars fans should start a fund to re do Ep VII and VIII. (Sort of joking)

Me too.

That explains A lot It makes me... honestly Sad that these writers put a Political Message into a movie and then get mad when the fans get mad that they just can't watch their favorite movie series without politics. I don't think people get it anymore. People don't want to be surrounded by politics. They can easily turn on CNN or Fox Or MSNBC or whatever they want very easily so watching Political Star Wars doesn't make them happy. I don't care if Rey is a snail. (Kind of do but) I just want a Star Wars movie.

Who is Chris Weitz Please tell me he is not a Writter

Exactly Han and Lando never really did anything like that. It's a Yes or No thing.

Yes but not that many no more than 7% MOST LIKLEY. I saw it on opening day, It was initially a 3 1/2 star for me. Now I give it a 1 1/2

Did anyone like my Alternative Plot.

Does anything think people who win the Medal of Honor were NEVER afraid in war, come on that's the point of it. You were afraid but didn't run Exactly But. Think Kamakazie then ejecting from the craft would be a better option. @DDE Did you like my Alternative Plot? I want to see if I could have written a better force Awakens for the fans?

Yes

I'm not saying they did nothing but they did nothing comparable to the original trilogy and the threat is bigger now that the empire ever was They had a planet killing machine. Did you like my alternative Ep VII Story?

What did she do that was comparable to attacking a moon with a few X-Wings vs thousands of Tie Fighters. It was a Suicide Mission and yet we went.

Luke did something to be a hero. He put his life on the line to save the entire galaxy. Rey did nothing Luke of course.

They don't care about it. REY FINN, POE are all bad charachters. It has nothing to do with racism of sexism. I don't like it because Rey has no reason to be as powerful as she is. She has done nothing to earn her hero title! Iden Versio did she saved Citizens from the empire and help saves many worlds from Operation Cinder. Rey flew around in the Falcon that's it. Oh right Finn saves some horse camel thing. He is a hero now Exactly.

Also The vast majority of Americans are not Rasicts. Ok? Calling everyone who doesn't like something a Sexist or Racist doesn't solve any problems. CNN Called Thomas the Tank Engine and Paw Patrol Sexist, Anti-Enviormentalist, Corperate Dystopia and more. I don't think the kids think this. Same thing for Star Wars. They don't like these Charachters because they are flat and have no development. No thought just zombies of the light, Luke struggled Leia Han Chewy C-3PO the old Star Wars we about Heroism Sacrifice liberation. To a extent. The new Star Wars are about over throwing the evil First Order. No characters have doubts about their side, no humanism just a Disney princess with the same thoughts. Lucas was going to have Luke turn and become a new Vader at the end of a Return but decided against it. It shows that Luke had doubts himself. These Charachters are Dumb, And lack development. What's special about Finn He is a defector, that all we know. Luke is a farmer turn Jedi Knight that help overthrow the most evil Galactic Regime. Disney Turned him into a Couch Potato. Rey is a scavenger... who is OP... who is... oh wait that's it! The children who watch Star Wars and Paw Patrol, Thomas, arnt thinking about it their thinking about the plot. Those who rate the movie as a movie and not just as a Star Wars movie understand it's problems.

I hated Gravity. All it was was someone panting the whole time and 100% inaccurate Physics and Orbital maneuvers

Lol

No because we always want to see them get blown up because they usally losers. Lol Anyone on my Alternative Plot.

I honestly think you are not getting Star Wars. These targeting computers are not F-16 Targeting Computers. Maby Luke worn a diaper... Does anyone like my alternative plot

Everything stays the same until we meet Rey and she gets her food. And find BB-8 and is back at the AT-AT Walker. BB-8 still hold the schematics to Luke Skywalker position. All the event happen the same but this time Finn who is trained flies the Falcon and Rey takes down the Tie Fighters. They meet up with Han the Same way. We now get a scene of Luke being his depressed self reading the Jedi Text. And him living his life on Ach To for a few moments. Luke has a cane but he doesn't need it. Maby 2 minutes tops for Luke on this scene. Next we get a scene to General Hux Preparing StarKiller bases in the command center but we don't actually see the base. This is also where Snoke is introduced. Snoke Demands that Rey be brought to Snoke on Star Killer base. We next see a scene of Leia demanding support for the resistance on The Capital World. We see a frustrated Leia after not getting on a ship after being denied the funding for the resistance and being to take off. We now go back to Star Killer base which we see is a Enormous star Destoyer sort of like the legends Eclipse. He orders it fire. It's a red laser that splits but it's a Kyber Crystal Based design. Leia reaches space and from here left sees a Red beam hit the planet Right when Leia jumps into Hyper Space. She begins to cry and reveals mon mothma was on the planet along with some of her freinds when it blew up. We see a scene of Luke dropping his cane line Yoda during Order 66. We now see Rey with Han Board the melinium Falcon and fly to Takodana. We see the Takodana scene as it except no force vision. We see the same scene all the way up until the Falcon leaves except Rey isn't captured. Kylo Ren places a Hyper Space tracker on the Falcon. They fly back to the Resistance base where Poe Leia Rey Han and Chewy all meet up. And share the hello, good day to you, greeting moment. We now see Luke Skywalker on Ach to Find his lightsaber. He ignites it and it is Purple like Mace Windu he continues to train. We now see him take out his green lightsaber. So he can dual wield and make it into a double bladed style. If he chooses. The scene ends. And we see the meeting about star Killer base which is a Snoke Ship sized Star Destoyer with a Super Laser in the front. It is also escorted by 4 Dreadnauhts and 8 star Destroyers escorting. The Resistance get support from a Fleet from the Unknown Regions Lead by Resistance Admiral Thrawn. The Cousin of Imperial Grand Admiral Thrawn. When Thrawn lands he devises a strategy similar the Ashoka Tano Ryloth campaign strategy. Use the capital ships to draw in the enemy and outflank them with fighters. It is decided that they do that plane to destroy the Star Killer base fleet. Also at the meeting Rey and Chewbacca C-3PO along with R2-D2 after find the complete Luke Skywalker map.Han Solo Poe and BB-8 go to blow up star killer base and being Kylo Back to the light side. When the Luke crew decided to fly to Acho the were unaware of the tracker. They take off. We see a scene of Kylo Reporting to Snoke the tracker is active and the Falcon is in transit. Just then the Alarm goes out across Star Killer base " Resistance Fleet Entering Secotr Battle Stations." We now see a scene of Chewbacca telling Rey to put on the helmet Luke used and Pick up her lightsaber and begin to train like Luke did with Obi Wan. C-3PO translates. When Rey puts on the helmet she has her force vision but this time foresees Her handing Luke the lightsaber. That only as her vision. We go to see Star Killer base under attack by resistance forces. The fighters all outflank and destroy all the capital ships and the dreadnaughts. They also take out 1/2 of the Engines on the ship and blow up the Super Weapon. They jump to Hyper Space to save their leader ship. A cannon on the Snoke Ship hits a Medical Frigate and it disintegrates when they jump. The order to abandon ship and transfer to the fleet we see in The Last Jedi. They also transfer data too the Capital Ship about the tracker. We now for the last scene see the normal end for the Force Awakens except when Luke takes the light saber he nods. The End How did you like that Plot compared to the one we got. Again that is a rough outline not a word for word just a food for thought. I'm going to being by Ep VIII Plot on what should happen in a later post. When I'm done eating... I've been writing this for a hour now lol. Don't mind the quotation thing Anyone like it more or less than what we got