Hello, fellow kerbonauts,
I've just finished writing the first chapter of a story, and would like a feedback on it. It's about the struggle of the humanity to survive on an alien planet, after the earth and all other colonies were wiped out.
I hope my writing (and english, for that matter) are not too lousy, because I am not a professional author and I am not native english speaker, but I still hope that I'll entertain you for ten minutes, at the very least.
Here's the link: http://www.inkitt.com/stories/48684
I'm looking forward to your feedback, whether positive or negative