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[InterCity]

Hello, fellow kerbonauts,

I've just finished writing the first chapter of a story, and would like a feedback on it. It's about the struggle of the humanity to survive on an alien planet, after the earth and all other colonies were wiped out.

I hope my writing (and english, for that matter) are not too lousy, because I am not a professional author and I am not native english speaker, but I still hope that I'll entertain you for ten minutes, at the very least.

Here's the link: http://www.inkitt.com/stories/48684

I'm looking forward to your feedback, whether positive or negative

[Kozak]

A few grammar errors here and there, but other than that it's good!

little confusing at points but i liked it.