New Short all about the first Kerbal to go into space! :D

[008agenta]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0QCjh1T_EAg

Heeey guys, I've out a new short up and would love for you to check it out here! I'd love some criticism as well (If you like what I'm doing with all of my other cinematics then subscribe! I'm planning on making an Apollo 13 style cinematic next!)

[sal_vager]

Very nice, and the music goes really well, good editing too

[Nassault630]

Play around with your compositions even more. Don't forget the rule of thirds!! Nice cuts. I enjoyed.

[Hyomoto]

Well, criticism first: spellcheck is a free feature widely available in many programs nowadays. It comes off as completely lazy and unprofessional when the opening screen contains a grievously obvious misspelled word, hint: it was miscellaneous. The second part is ... MechJeb? I'm sure its was so you could focus on recording instead of flying, but personally I would've suggested hiding its presence. This is just a personal thing, but it undermines the whole 'first Kerbal in space'. MechJeb has an immediate, permanent, negative impact on the impressiveness of any activity in KSP. But, I'm sure that varies from viewer to viewer so your mileage may vary.

And now, the positive: the music worked really well. At first I didn't like some of its off-notes, but it has a driving tempo which you utilized well for scene transitions. It also matched with the subject matter nicely and helped the whole video 'pop'. I enjoyed your use of fades between the ship and the orbital map, it helped cement the position of the ship in the mission timeline. And most importantly, unlike your previous Duna video, this one has a very coherent sequence of events, avoids abrupt jumps and tells a complete story that is easy to understand and follow.