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Yep, my brain went as well. I feel bad for Jeb, seeing how I am portraying him in my story ;.;

I saw a lot of red at the beginning, otherwise an excellent story!

Dang, you must spread some reputation around before giving it to Danish_Savage again. Otherwise I would give you some for a well-phrased post

Give him time, I am just as impatient as you are if not more. However I am also writing a story and I know how he feels (kinda)

Look closely Maybe, maybe not

There you all go. A new chapter for some more feedback

Chapter 6: Mercy’s Strength A female Kerbal reached me first, thrusting her mic into my face, she breathlessly said. “This is Rachelle Kerman from news channel Five. How did you make it back, Jebediah? How do you feel? What happened?†As she was questioning me, several others came sprinting up. One of which shouted above the noise, “This is Leland Kerman from KBS, what do you have to say about your boss declaring you MIA?†Before I was able to answer any of the questions, Mandie shouldered her way through the growing crowd. Urgently demanding, “What happened out there Jeb? You look like you saw the kraken himself!†Every Kerbal there gasped in shock over what she had declared so frankly. “I might have, if it weren’t for my boss!†I state, jerking my chin towards my boss, who is standing a little distance from the crowd. Looking at me like he was staring at a ghost. “Thanks to my boss, I was able to notice that some-Kerbal had sabotaged my craft. If it were not for the training he made me go through, I don’t think I would have made it back to the KSC, let alone this continent.†Jebediah stated confidently. “Once I had noticed the problem, I attempted to turn the aircraft around and go hell-bent for leather to get back here.†“However, as I was turning around, the aircraft spun out of control and I was unable to recover until I reached about 6 km in altitude. Once I had regained control of the aircraft, I realized that my current fuel situation would not allow me to reach the space center. Thus I risked another sub-orbital hop to see if I could make it back. At the end of that hop, I was at about 6-8 km above the sea and noticed land off to the side. Turning off my current heading towards land, I landed about 70 km from the space center. There I got rid of unnecessary weight, and placed a flag with a homing beacon to mark the spot. After that, I took off again and ran my engines until they ran out of fuel. You all know what happened after that.†Answered Jeb simply and quickly. After the press conference was over, Daniel Kerman (my boss) took me to his office for the debriefing. We did the usual debrief then at the end, he set down the paperwork and asked me a question which was most certainly not on the debriefing paper. “Jebediah, why did you protect me out there instead of blaming me?†He inquired. “Well sir, it’s like this. You are my boss and I respect that. To put it simply, if there is someone in a position of authority that I do not like as a Kerbal, I still respect them because of the position they hold. Thus I respect you because you are my boss.†Jebediah stated flatly and coldly.

Not a clue, but I know that something like that will be fun to write. (that's coming from another writer)

My thoughts exactly

Just wait, you don't have to bump your thread every hour. When I first posted my story, I kinda forgot about it until someone had commented, then I started writing more content for it. I don't think anyone has commented on my story for a couple of days. So my advice is just wait and let people find your story on their own. That's just my two cents

I hope that whatever was the problem has been resolved by the time I post this, but if not I hope that it gets resolved soon so you don't have to deal with it as long. Side note nice pics

I agree. Thankfully this is not the finished version of the game, so the dev's could still make this part of it *crossed fingers*. But in the meantime if you are a good programmer/modeler you could make a mod to do this (FYI I am neither of those)

You can do whatever you want, I was not expecting you to do more then one logo you make more when YOU have the time to do them, preferably during slow times so that I am not taking you from the other requests. Please do not make my logos a top priority, I do not want to take your time from the other users. What I am trying to do is keep you updated on my story, since you expressed some interest in it

Thanks, a chapter might be coming out in the next few days. Still need to hear back from some friends about some stuff before I can stick the next one up

This is coming from someone with barely any knowledge of programming, but I agree with the above quote. Except for the fact that I think fly-together MP should be limited to 2-5 players to avoid the time-warp issue. Not trying to start that argument again though, I just want to some space battles maybe? but most certainly being able to fly around the atmosphere with friends. Having said that, I will be keeping an eye on this thread like a hawk

Thanks, if you have any questions about the story you can post them there. EDIT: I put a link to you right underneath the logo

Thanks, but I will be needing something more like 6 or 8 different news stations. I will be using your suggestions

I was wondering if you would make a logo for my story? here is the link to it so that you have an idea of what I want. I would like a large one to go on the front page and a smaller one to in my sig, if you would be so kind

Where is your try?

NVM posted it at the same time as the OP

nice What I was intending to do was edit my answer before you got to it saying: the only reason I am referencing EE WWK series is to provide a sense of chaos. that was so that I would be able to answer one of the questions in the prologue. Let me put it to you this way, would losing a space battle at a planetary system far from your own fill the streets with a sense of panic? Or would having the Space Center that is no less then 20 kilometers and no more then 100 kilometers being completely destroyed fill the streets with panic? Sorry for being harsh, I like to win any debates I am in Also if someone would be kind enough to come up with a logo, that would make my job a whole lot easier since I am not an artist at all

I'll think about it

Myself as well

Not sure what you mean:huh: Once I know what he means I think I might be able to write it in somehow

Sorry that they are so short, but I will be needing some help with the next chapter, does anyone have any good fictional news stations that I can use? As always any feedback is welcome. Also sorry if I confused anyone with that jumble of words. I am most certainly not a writer at all