My First Cinematic

[Kilof]

Hello everyone, I bring you my first short film over a Kerbal station science and technology.
The orbiting station Kerbin in a circular orbit with apoapsis at 130 km and 129 km Periaphisis.
I hope you enjoy!

Note: Leave your comments and suggestions to improve future kinematics I'm planning.
Ps: I am Brazilian and because of that all the channel's videos are in Portuguese   Sorry.

[Randazzo]

Congrats on the station and the video!

I'd say maybe choose some music with a little less epic percussion and more soothing strings, but that's just my opinion.

[Kilof]

14 hours ago, Randazzo said:

Congrats on the station and the video!

I'd say maybe choose some music with a little less epic percussion and more soothing strings, but that's just my opinion.

Thanks for the idea! Maybe I will do this! The next cinematic will be about the others planets, maybe an exploration I don't Know ! Thank you so much!

[Just Jim]

18 hours ago, Randazzo said:

Congrats on the station and the video!

I'd say maybe choose some music with a little less epic percussion and more soothing strings, but that's just my opinion.

I agree about the music.... but only because of the video itself. 

This video is really good... but nothing really scary happened, like a wrenching explosion.  So for this I would have also chosen something maybe a little softer...

The music you used, I would save that for a more dramatic video... maybe a video trying to launch something really big, with the first few attempts not going so well... some explosions to fit the music.... and a final successful launch in the end for a climax.

Remember, half the fun is KSP is failing.... with a huge bang!

Edited March 17, 2016 by Just Jim

[Andem]

Quite good, although I was expecting an explosion... 

[Kilof]

16 hours ago, Andem said:

Quite good, although I was expecting an explosion... 

Thank you for watching and thank you for criticism too! I will do better next!

16 hours ago, Just Jim said:

I agree about the music.... but only because of the video itself. 

This video is really good... but nothing really scary happened, like a wrenching explosion.  So for this I would have also chosen something maybe a little softer...

The music you used, I would save that for a more dramatic video... maybe a video trying to launch something really big, with the first few attempts not going so well... some explosions to fit the music.... and a final successful launch in the end for a climax.

Remember, half the fun is KSP is failing.... with a huge bang!

Thank you, I will think of these points in the next video, I understood the idea of you and I agree!

 

[Nahim]

You can do better!

You gonna do better! Just add some roleplay! Yes create a history for the missions.

Like a mission log for our hero kerbanauts! Just a suggestion! Have Fun making cinematics!

[Kilof]

13 hours ago, Nahim said:

You can do better!

You gonna do better! Just add some roleplay! Yes create a history for the missions.

Like a mission log for our hero kerbanauts! Just a suggestion! Have Fun making cinematics!

Nice idea, I will remember this when i record the cenes.