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"Recover Vessel" KSP Survival Story [Part XI: "The Derelict Mine"]

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"Recover Vessel"

By: @ZooNamedGames

 After a failure aboard her capsule, left lost in the middle of undeveloped Kerbin. These are the adventures of Jabe Kerman as she attempts to make her way back home.

 

Introduction

Part 2: Beginning The Voyage

Part 3: The Awakening

Part 4: For Miles and Miles

Part 5: Panic

Part 6: The True Adventure Begins...

Part 7: The Dark Woods

Part 8: The Clearing

Part 9: Fire On The Horizon

Part 10: Into The Depths

Part 11: The Derelict Mine

More Coming Soon...

 

If you enjoyed reading this, why not consider reading through some of my other work?

Spoiled

Saturn Shuttle Mission Series

 

Hope you enjoyed reading!

    

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25 minutes ago, UnusualAttitude said:

Awesome. By the way,  nice description of the terrifying experience that re-entry must be. And 1st person narratives rule! 

In KSP, re-entry is as common as launching in general. So I thought you should know how hard it really is.

They are a fresh take compared to the 3rd person most use.

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5 minutes ago, ZooNamedGames said:

In KSP, re-entry is ALMOST as common as launching in general. So I thought you should know how hard it really is.

They are a fresh take compared to the 3rd person most use.

There, I fixed it. :)

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Wow. That was intense!

I notice she got an scrapped map. They are made of paper! Great material to start a fire with flint and steel!

And Jane story with the people of the Space program could be told by flashbacks. What you think? 

Question: Why did she hauls the pod hatch with her?

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I had planned to leave this behind because I wasn't feeling any reward from doing it (and I felt there wasn't much reader appreciation(aside from the few who did say good things)). So I had planned to just stop writing but my exceptional boredom at the moment has beaten me, so I will write the next part. My boredom comes from me waiting for a 3D joystick to be delivered from Amazon.

So expect the next part by 7pm EST... seriously this time.

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Well. When you need to "put it out", come and write one more chapter.

 

No one here are trying to force you to write. You must do what you want to do.

 

When your heart is ready just let it go.

 

Or try perhaps... To change the story model into something that amuses you more... Kerbal is na humoristc game not na harsh survivor game you know...

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