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Advancing Through Hardships - Chapter 24: The Wrath of the Kraken[Complete]


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Advancing Through Hardships

I know that right now, there are multiple folks working on alternate NASA timelines so mine

isn't very special. I love writing though and this will be my first post in the mission reports section. Also, if you do follow

this post, expect frequent blackouts because of school and Ksp burn-out, which I have been recently 

trying to fix. This post will be completely stock and will try to make as interesting as possible with non-rocketry chapters

thrown into the mix. Also, please comment on this and tell me what you would like to see and also if I wrote something

wrong. If I recieve no comments, then I will assume that this post is not meeting its expectations. There will

be pictures of the rockets, though I don't know how many pictures, so assume that this not picture orientated.

Thank you for your time for reading this post, Advancing Through Hardships.  

EDIT: I have installed a load of mods, but only because I am playing with a new save that comes in

with the later chapters. The early chapters are completely mod free

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Chapter One: Fly, Fly Away Rocket

     

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Chapter two: Danger a long way from home

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Sorry, RL will get in the way so much, the rest of the entries will come every two or three days.

 

Chapter 3: Looking behind.

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Chapter Four: An old Friend

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Chapter 5: A New Plan

Sorry, RL has been computer free the last couple days, this will make up for the lack of POA. By the way, I am giving Ultimate Steve the credit for coming up with the story in a spoiler  

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By the way, I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions for the name of the series, since I am out of ideas, and that I dislike the present name because it doesn't signify what in the world this series is about. Thanks for all your help.

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Chapter 6: Maybe Minmus 

Through an unanimous vote, since only I was voting, I have renamed this series, Advancing Through Hardships. Enjoy!

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Chapter 7: Off the Mun

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Read the story. Gotta say, it's quite good! I like how the anomalies show up every five minutes (just like in real life, and this isn't sarcasm), and the characterisation is definitely your story's strongest asset. I could definitely learn from your writing.

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Thanks. Yes I know how I real life every single mission launched--and a few that didn't--had some problems. I read an autobiography about Gene Kranz, the flight director that Gene Kerman is based off of, and it went into detail about alot of problems that could have finished missions but were solved by Mission Control. Never underestimate Mission Control. By the way, the book I read is called, "Failure is not a Option" and it is a very good read. 

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Chapter 8: An Advanced Start

I case you are wondering. I have started a new career mode game which I use Tantares ALOT. I mean, its my favorite mod other than KSPI-E or USI. But there is a catch.....I have cheated my way to about the three hour point in the game, but this was a week ago. That is why there has been no pictures. I hope that the pictures will pick up through these few chapters, though I can not assure you that the pictures will continue. Also, chapters are going to come and go pretty fast.

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Chapter 9: Progression(s)

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Chapter 10: A New Partner

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Chapter 11: In the Highlands of Kerbin

Sorry for the shorter chapter, RL becoming a problem again because of the promise of guests next week. I'll try to get one, maybe two more chapters during the weekend to make up for this intrusion:/.

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Chapter 12: The Mun or Else......

Unfortunately, I am very far ahead in the story in the game so I'm just going to breeze through about 8 launches in this chapter and the next, then I'll be back to one launch per chapter. 

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Chapter 13: The Manned Program

This might be the last chapter for a while. Sorry about it but life is life :(

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Chapter 14: The Race

Good fortune awaits those who work. This was painful getting this out, but its worth it.

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Chapter 15: "You don't know!"

Sorry, I keep under-estimating how much spare time I have after school finished :)

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Anybody want to volunteer....push, push......shove, shove.....to become my editor. I'm terrible with grammar and spelling. Also, I could use the help of somebody rereading what I wrote and telling me whats wrong. I write a lot, but half of it makes limited sense.

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  On 5/28/2017 at 1:36 PM, Alpha 360 said:

Also, I could use the help of somebody rereading what I wrote and telling me whats wrong. I write a lot, but half of it makes limited sense.

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I just got caught up, and I don't see much of anything wrong... in fact, it's getting really, really good!

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Wow.... They're back... But you seem to be coming at them from a completely different angle.... Excellent... I'm super curious to find out where you're going with this.

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I am soooooo flattered that Just Jim is reading my story! I can hardly believe it! You have just made my day, big time.

Also, want spoilers?

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Chapter 16: An Insight

This chapter's purpose is to instill interest in the story, give a little look at the Kraken, and to totally creep folks out. 

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Chapter 17: "Its been Hell"

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