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[AAR] The Grand Tour - Voyage To The Planets

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el_coyoto

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Awesome chapter, thank your for all your hard work.

I'm not so much into [Writing] usually, but I really got hooked up to your stuff, because it is so good.

My OCD spotted a little typo at ~15th line of dialogue :

"JEB: 'Cause if you won't… I'll brake your fraking legs." -> "JEB: 'Cause if you won't… I'll break your fraking legs."

Also, can't wait to see some new chapters in your "Space Race AAR", especially after you teased us with the N1 and the Red Space Program. :cool:

Cheers!

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Amazing new Chapters! I'm currently on vacation in Croatia and can't check for new chapters very often, so i just got to read them now. I'm very happy to read that BERTY finally "solved" his psychological (can you say that although it's an AI?) problems and took action against Rozer. I'm very curious to see how this will turn out.

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czokletmuss

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Awesome chapter, thank your for all your hard work.

I'm not so much into [Writing] usually, but I really got hooked up to your stuff, because it is so good.

My OCD spotted a little typo at ~15th line of dialogue :

"JEB: 'Cause if you won't… I'll brake your fraking legs." -> "JEB: 'Cause if you won't… I'll break your fraking legs."

Also, can't wait to see some new chapters in your "Space Race AAR", especially after you teased us with the N1 and the Red Space Program. :cool:

Thanks, this was kinda silly typo, I hope it didn't distract you while reading :)

Amazing new Chapters! I'm currently on vacation in Croatia and can't check for new chapters very often, so i just got to read them now. I'm very happy to read that BERTY finally "solved" his psychological (can you say that although it's an AI?) problems and took action against Rozer. I'm very curious to see how this will turn out.

Ah, Croatia... I envy you - it's quite cold here in Poland right now :)

So, when you do this, do you have it all planned out what will happen beforehand? or do you play the game and see where it lands you?

It's more complicated than that. I do plan of course, as you can clearly see on the first page of this thread. However, sometimes things just go wrong - for instance, this whole situation with the AMU on Dres was totally unexpected. So even with everything more or less planned (in game and story-wise), there is always the unpredictable. If I mess up something, crew members can be killed in game, which will obviously affect the story. And so on - that's why writing AAR is so interesting I think :)

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I think that we should sign up Rozer to the next manned mission to Eve.

I don't think Rozer is bad enough to send to that god awful planet. Sure he beat up Jeb, but anywhere but that terrible planet. Maroon him on Eeloo or Dres. Just don't send him to that purple hell.

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I don't think Rozer is bad enough to send to that god awful planet. Sure he beat up Jeb, but anywhere but that terrible planet. Maroon him on Eeloo or Dres. Just don't send him to that purple hell.

Although it does beg the question of what if Rozer had gone down instead of Bob? If something had happened to Rozer prior to the events on Duna, then who would have been there to conduct the Protius' true mission? That's why I'm wondering why Rozer didn't spill the beans once the ship had left Kerbin's SOI, had something happen to him these people would still only be planting flags and posing for photos.

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What do you mean?

Well, there are several parts of the AAR that aren't written into the chapters. I say they are cut --- meaning they are not included in the final version. By the way, do you know that the Outsiders movie (originated from the Outsiders book by S.E. Hilton) has 2 versions: shorter version (with several cuts) and longer, full version (with all scenes included).

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czokletmuss

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I've had to take some work to home for the weekend, so I'm not sure whether there will be update in the next 24 hours, but in the next 48 hours there definitely will be one, so stay tuned folks :)

using google translation to hear berty voice is quite funny it really immerse

Huh, that's a good idea actually.

I can't wait for the next chapter!
Awesome chapter. I could almost feel the punches.

Thanks folks, I appreciate it :)

Well, there are several parts of the AAR that aren't written into the chapters. I say they are cut --- meaning they are not included in the final version. By the way, do you know that the Outsiders movie (originated from the Outsiders book by S.E. Hilton) has 2 versions: shorter version (with several cuts) and longer, full version (with all scenes included).

Ok, I get it now. Well yes, you can say that this AAR is a part of something bigger. In chronological order (within the world) there is "Space Race", than "Mission to Jool" and than "The Grand Tour". When you add all the additional info and extra screenshots, you have a director's cut version of the whole trilogy :)

*fanboy screams* I hope jeb doesn't die, unlike another certain crew member who got injured on a planet (It's bob)

Of course I won't say anything about any member of the crew, but - as you probably noticed - space is a dangerous place.

So.. You are not going to pull a SWARM are you? 'Cause that's my thing... And you are going to need more ships if you want to pull it off.

If by the SWARM you mean a Horde of Alien Locusts, than no, not really :)

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