Rendezvous and Docking made easy!

[Tortoise]

This is my first tutorial. Feedback appreciated! Thanks guys

[Metro]

The tutorial per se is not bad, but there were a few things you should do better next time.

1. Keep the sound, better your voice but at least the in game sound (makes it more interesting, and not "boring" to watch)

2. Always place the text on a even line, it made my head hurt to tend it all the time to read the text

3. Display the text for a longer time, I couldn't read the half of it

4. It makes your videos bigger and takes longer to finally have them up, but a tutorial should always be 1080p, at least 720p especially when it's about such accurate things as docking in a dark enviroment

5. Keep the videos short and specific, but at the same time stay calm and explain precise. There was much stuff in this video what doesn't directly belong to the title

By the way, you don't say "Please launch into the right direction" you say "Launch East".

I hope my feedback will help you to improve your further videos.

Edited May 4, 2014 by Metro