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    MOHOLE 2 trailer

    in KSP Fan Works

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    2 hours ago, Lo Var Lachland said:

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    Thanks! I just found this guy so I didn't know it had been released. 

    Lol, but i know you ;), saw you on PE discord server. Actually i worked as cameraman and editors for OP Duna ep.2.

    Mohole 2 a 30 min. Fully voice acted Cinematic-Movie is here.

    in KSP Fan Works

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    On 7/25/2019 at 5:35 PM, steuben said:

    Thanks for reacting to my video, and your constructive thought. 

    Hower i didn't understand this:

    "Small detail thing... install that life support mod. One of the displays was going oh crap you'll all going to die because somebody forgot a module on the surface of Kerbin. Distracting when you see it."

     

     

    On 7/24/2019 at 7:49 PM, KSK said:

    Woah - talk about a cliffhanger!

    Okay - feedback.

    First of all, this was obviously a real labour of love and everyone involved must have put in a ton of work. The voice acting was good - it gave the film a very different feel to the more usual use of subtitles plus Chatterer that, I think, is better suited to action sequences. Big shout out to Stanzi Carpenter - I thought she made a great Val.

    The ship designs were great and I really liked the Mohole POV shots - very reminiscent of the Predator movies. And last but not least, I enjoyed the story - looking forward to Part 3 if you good folks get around to making it!

    If I had one criticism it would be in some of the pacing and cinematography. There were quite a lot of 'camera swooping through a dark ship against a dark background with lens flare' sequences that could (in my opinion anyway) have been shortened or used less often. Likewise the cockpit shots - there were a number of places where one of the pilots was just scanning the instrument panel and nothing much happened. 

    But, at the end of the day, you did it! Filmed, edited, finished and posted. You got past that one cool idea you had, or one epic sequence you wanted to film, and put together the whole story and finished it. I know how much work that takes (I'm still working on that 'getting it finished' thing with my own story) and for that, I applaud you all.

     

    Thank you. Yes the clifhanger is here for Mohole 3 ( the last of Mohole series ). Mohole 3 is going to be a nightmare to do, ( already writted ) KSP is great to make story, but at the core it's a game, so i'm very limited sometimes. But thank you for your response , really appreciate it.

    Looking for a very good crafter for a cinematic

    in KSP1 The Spacecraft Exchange

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    Just now, sgt_flyer said:

    Do tell what you have in mind :) (and which mods / addons you wish for) :)

    I use 1.4.5 ksp version, but can move to other version if the mods requiere it.

    The first ship, i'm looking for it's a SpaceShip ( not huge ) that can land and liftoff from Duna. The SpaceShip need to carrie two little one seat ship. Well this actually 

    And a Base with a dome, something like this 

     

    MOHOLE 2 trailer

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    16 hours ago, HansonKerman said:

    Oh good!! THE TRAILER IS HEEERRREE! Mohole 1 was a smash hit (of sorts) and I am very excited to see the movie!!!

    @Oraldo revak, If i've learned anything from Mohole, it's that you, sir, are a professional.

    Thank you that's very kind. Can't wait to have some feed back when it will be out ;)

    MOHOLE 2 trailer

    in KSP Fan Works

    Posted · Edited by Oraldo revak

     

    For ksp formus .

    MOHOLE 2 Trailer. Ksp Movie 

    Hi here is the trailer of sequel of Mohole. Please check the description before or after watch it.

     

     

    Thanks for taking the time to read the description. 

    First Mohole is estimate to comes out at the 22 of june, but it can be later.
    I also going to release two version of it. One with the kerbalish language and one with voice actor.There's three people so far who help me, but i'm looking for more male and female .
    You don't need to be a great actor, just have a decent mic.
    You can join me at:
    [email protected]
    -discord "oraldo revak 9385--
    -skype "oraldo revak"
    and just coment here. 

     

    thank you to any people who watch like and coment my video. Please consider to subscribe, there's a lot of ksp movie who will comes.

    Re-post I made this gigantic Ksp cinematic-movie. Really want some feed back.

    in KSP Fan Works

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    On 5/15/2019 at 4:06 PM, Alpha 360 said:

    This is amazing. Great quality of film there, the cinematography is incredible! 

    Thank you. You are working for Occupy Duna ? Because i asked a question and they never respond.

    Good joob though.

    9 hours ago, HansonKerman said:

    My goodness was this amazing. Amazing use of mods, amazing crafts, amazing story, amazing edits, etc.

     

    I love it.

    Maybe a sequel?

    Please?

    Pretty pretty please?

     

    One involving the Mohole creature?

    You are right on the point :) Mohole 2 trailer will be soon out ;).

    New Ksp cinematic-movie "Minmus"

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    9 hours ago, steuben said:

    Yes, many pans, zooms, and ... whatever the third similar cinematic technique is. I have yet to decide if it is a signature stype born of the necessity of the limitations of the game or a choice.

    As for Jeb, the phrase translated out of kerbish is "Chrome steel and coconuts"

    Depends, sometimes is the  limitation of the game, sometimes is the limatation how my imagination.

     

    "Chrome steel and coconuts" Whaaaaaaaaaaaat ??! Don't get it.

    New Ksp cinematic-movie "Minmus"

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    Hi, i'm back ! I made already 2 ksp cinematic "SkyKnight" and "Mohole". Now it's Minmus.

    As before i do like to have your tought on it. This time i've been lucky, someone help me to correct grammar. 

    Also i would like to precise that this ( easy, short ) video, was made because i was working to create the scenario of my next video, something who's going to be call.. "Mohole 2" Oh yeah that's right :) 

     La version Française sera disponible très bientôt (  moins de 24 heures )

     

     

    Re-post I made this gigantic Ksp cinematic-movie. Really want some feed back.

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    12 hours ago, steuben said:

    Yes, some of the early panning shots were felt long. Perhaps either shortened or additional exposition added in those scenes.

    You should run the text through a solid English grammar checker, after running it through translate software of choice. Some of it was more off than not, which does distract from watching it.

     

    Hopefully, i will have someone ( an english ) who will correct my grammar :), for my future Ksp cinematic .

    7 hours ago, 5thHorseman said:

    I gave it a second try with the knowledge that there was more to it than endless pans and fades, and I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed it from about the time Val started her Moho landing to the very end.

    So happy you did ;)

    5 hours ago, Lisias said:

    Good. Looks like you really liked Interstellar, the cinematography and the self-sacrificing theme made me remind of it.

    I also watched Sky Night, and interesting enough, I found it even better. The last scene was incredibly touching. You also watched Europe Report, didn't? :)

    Congrats.

    On the other hand, I think you should spare your Kerbals a bit. :)

    It's like a friend of mine told me about Star Trek: the first time they destroyed the Enterprise, it was really something. As the follow ups keept destroying it, it lost significance and turned it into a "OMG they killed Kenny" thing: just something that happens now and then.

    on the other hand... Perhaps my criticism could be premature, who knows? :D

     

    I watch Interstellar once a month. Yes some shot, are directly inspired, or even the same from the movie. Yes i watched Europe report, but don't remember it well. 

    Thank you for reacted and give your feedback. It could be premature indeed, you'll see in the next video, coming at the end of the month ;)

    4 hours ago, FleshJeb said:

    That was really fantastic. I was legitimately frightened for a large portion of it. :D Your cinematography is VERY good. I subscribed to your channel for more.

    Constructive critique:

    • The camera move down the ship, just before the engine fires, on the ejection from Moho to Duna was too fast.
    • Use longer pauses between the days on the way to Duna. Just one or two seconds more for the camera to linger. Time is supposed to be passing slowly--Let it pass.
    • Jeb summarizing the trip in his log: We know, we just watched it. He can begin his last log with the Automated Sequence Error, and skip talking about the rest of the mission.

    Glad you subscribed, because there will be more, actually a 20 min. one, at the end of the month.

    And thank you for your contructive critique, really help, to have a "exterior" point of view .

    Re-post I made this gigantic Ksp cinematic-movie. Really want some feed back.

    in KSP Fan Works

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    8 minutes ago, 5thHorseman said:

    I didn't want to comment on the first one but you asked twice, so here goes.

    I did not make it more than a few minutes through it. I saw maybe a dozen panning cinematic shots with no context or story and figured the rest of the movie would be the same.

    Sorry, but you did ask twice.

    No story ? No context ? Do you have the right link ? If you do, you realize that, it is a "game-movie". You are very limited for scenario. But i guess i have to have a first negative review. It's okay.

    Just can you please tell me which dozen shots with no context or story did you found in only "few minutes". I'm really confused, i don't get it . Maybe because i'm not english, i didn't get your point...

    I understand that everyone couldn't enjoy, but in like 20 comment i have, you are really the only one , who tell him, that the story is inexistant..

    Really confused. 

    peace

    Post Your Cinematics Here! (Cinematic Enthusiasts)

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    Hello, my little green friends. Here is the Trailer of the my second Ksp Movie-Cinematic.

    A 30 minutes of cinematic-script-voice and music. My biggest project for a video, more than 500 clip shot in the montage.

    It's actually 80% done. But i could use some help for:

    -Someone who can correct my grammar mistake. ( i'm not english native so..)

    -Someone who can voice "Bill" ( don't worries, no need to be a great actor, because i'll reverse your voice text, to create kerbalish ).

    -Someone who can voice "Valentina" ( don't vorries, no need to be a great actor, because i'll reverse your voice text, to create kerbalish .

     

    So if someone is intrested, you can contact me on Skype : Oraldo Revak

                                                                                              Discord : Oraldo Revak  9385

    or you can respond here.

    ps: It's a 30 minutes videos. So there's a alot of voice and grammar check to do.

     

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