Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 (edited) You might want to also add in xannari's actions to save my character or at least that her exact fate is unknown, presumed dead. Edited July 14, 2015 by Sampa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Junior Posted July 14, 2015 Author Share Posted July 14, 2015 Will do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 (edited) Yep!!- - - Updated - - -http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww232/Sebsundquist/WAR%20MAP_zpsjtoqql3b.png- - - Updated - - -What do you thinK?Doesn't the Great Attractor mass thousands of times that of a galaxy?Not to mention quite a long way away? ...Like, very?[i suppose I should also give an update onto what was happening][Project: Exahelix 1 was left uncompleted. It was intended to skip the Petahelix factor by being capable of up to Helix Factor 9; 9 Giga parsecs per second. That's pretty silly fast][Exahelix 1 was also intended to be a weapon of supermassive destruction, only to be used as a last resort, and in the name of the Great Attractor. If laced with Verterons, it has the power to create a black hole. Exact power output is projected to be 1400 Brontojoules, but it's way, way too high to safely measure from practically any distance][And lastly, Sampa was tasked with guarding the Great Attractor. Information in Xannari's database is for his eyes only. Sampa, and only Sampa is to live in the base. Should he violate either of these, the AI will take over] Edited July 14, 2015 by Xannari Ferrows Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 (edited) Debriefing:One year has passed since the first Xannarian War. Sampa, though barely surviving his encounter with Xannari, has been left mentally scarred (so Citadel psychologists say). With the final defeat of Xannari, Sampa was hailed as a hero. Upon speaking with him myself, however, I do not see him as such. He is only a small man trying to atone for his mistakes. I suppose that, given the circumstances which he was faced with, anyone would crack under the pressure.Over the past year, while Sampa recovered, he acted as a liaison for the Cerberus government in the Citadel. This is only a temporary arrangement while he recovers. I suppose it was only natural that since the Citadel is his child that he should play an active role in its use as a government. Politically, the Citadel turned out to be the best thing for the galaxy, not the white elephant that many believed it would be. Since the events of last year, countless new factions have set up embassies in the Citadel and applied to be on the council. I believe that things are on the up and up for this galaxy.Cerberus has not forgotten the court martial however, and at the beginning of this year, scheduled the first meeting. to see if he has recovered enough, mentally, to begin his trial. I do not want to think about what will occur if they find him guilty of the charges. Even now, Sampa prepares to go to the Cerberus Admiralty for the meeting.Admiral HackettC-Sec(hope you guys appreciate this small prologue I wrote to kick off Part II. Thought to write it from the eyes of another character.) Edited July 14, 2015 by Sampa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [Oh gods, I kinda killed myself. I don't get to play a part! I don't know, maybe I can be the computer. In fact, Mariyate could play the computer! Off playing Zelda II right now though...I'm still trying to not listen to Funeral Dirge, but it's so hard!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [Oh gods, I kinda killed myself. I don't get to play a part! I don't know, maybe I can be the computer. In fact, Mariyate could play the computer! Off playing Zelda II right now though...I'm still trying to not listen to Funeral Dirge, but it's so hard!](Go back and read the official prologue on page 1! We left you some space to return. Your fate is currently missing, presumed dead.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 (Go back and read the official prologue on page 1! We left you some space to return. Your fate is currently missing, presumed dead.)[but how? The one who uses 1771 is fated to die afterwards Look man I'm tryin' to be dramatic here! The only way for me to survive is for someone else to die. I mean, I could probably have the AI medical protocols occur for a complete neural re-structure, and a mix of the life essentials I mentioned earlier, but the passcode is needed] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Junior Posted July 14, 2015 Author Share Posted July 14, 2015 Presumed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [but how? The one who uses 1771 is fated to die afterwards Look man I'm tryin' to be dramatic here! The only way for me to survive is for someone else to die. I mean, I could probably have the AI medical protocols occur for a complete neural re-structure, and a mix of the life essentials I mentioned earlier, but the passcode is needed]Or, if you want, we could go back and rewrite that part of the story so you won't die! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 Or, if you want, we could go back and rewrite that part of the story so you won't die![but then you would have! I wont let that happen! I'll play the darn computer if I have to] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 (Wait! idea! Thanks to my character's job on the Citadel and being a major ship captain, we could use the Lazarus Project to bring your character back!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [There will be a surprise for you if you go ahead with that plan] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 (Cool, I suppose that that project was going to be used one way or another! lol btw, the reason why I mentioned my character's pay, the Lazarus Project is a multi-million dollar project) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [You still use money? This is gonna be a bit more complex than I thought...] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 (Well, when you think about it, being a high official in Cerberus, a ship captain, and a Citadel Liaison for Cerberus has its advantage as far as money is concerned. Plus, you didn't think that bringing a person back from the dead would be easy, did you? In Mass Effect 2, it took 2 years to bring Shepherd back from the dead (though HIS Illusive Man ended up being a complete jerk)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [Wait a minute...Please tell me his name was Tim... ...No? I can't make the jokes then][i don't know the details of the project, so you're on your own with that one. ​I'd at least look in the computer first] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [Wait a minute...Please tell me his name was Tim... ...No? I can't make the jokes then][i don't know the details of the project, so you're on your own with that one. ​I'd at least look in the computer first]here's a link to the idea:http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Lazarus_Project- - - Updated - - -(Essentially, the idea to bring you back was to provide you with a second chance, much like how you brought my character back and gave him a second chance.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [You mean to tell me you haven't been original this whole time For the most part?Well, what's 2 years for you is 10 minutes for me. Plus I can't really refuse For obvious reasons] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 (some ideas I pulled from various sources, but I changed several aspects to make it somewhat original (I am TERRIBLE with ideas *bows head in resignition*)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xannari Ferrows Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 [Alright, fair enough. You can all fire away when ready. I'll be... Well, dead, but also drinking something. It's been 8 hours and I've had no Mtn. Dew yet!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Junior Posted July 14, 2015 Author Share Posted July 14, 2015 Well, I think we should continue the story.I'll get started on that.- - - Updated - - -it's been 2 years since the great xannarian War. The Galaxy has recovered and the Galactic Alliance is flourishing. Sampa has recovered from his head wound and is now a vital part of the Alliance. Xannari is still MIA. Junior has rose to the head of GA Military. However, there's trouble brewing all around the galaxy as tensions rise... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windspren Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 Here's our galaxy map. Talk to me if you want your territory added.http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww232/Sebsundquist/WAR%20MAP_zpsdkijleqa.pngMy my territory is Kerbol and the surrounding stars. And the Great Attractor is actually a supercluster of galaxies.- - - Updated - - -Um... There's absolutely NO mention of me in the first post. What am I, chopped liver? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Junior Posted July 14, 2015 Author Share Posted July 14, 2015 I was bjuilding up to that. And if you have any liver, I'd like some. i know this great recipe.- - - Updated - - -I'm redesigning the whole map.- - - Updated - - -But I won't do the whole supercluster thing because that'll take FOREVER and we'd show up as a tiny dot.- - - Updated - - -The way Xannari described it, I pictured a sun-like object with hundreds of small moons around it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sampa Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 The way Xannari described it, I pictured a sun-like object with hundreds of small moons around it.OMG, now my avatar looks perfect given that he/she gave me the duty to protect it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Junior Posted July 14, 2015 Author Share Posted July 14, 2015 - - - Updated - - -The purple dot is the Citadel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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