legoclone09 Posted May 9, 2016 Share Posted May 9, 2016 It's really good, loved Chapter 2. I can't wait for 3! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted May 9, 2016 Author Share Posted May 9, 2016 1 minute ago, legoclone09 said: It's really good, loved Chapter 2. I can't wait for 3! I'm going to take a break form owning KSP's S tonight, and get as much as I can on google docs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted May 10, 2016 Author Share Posted May 10, 2016 (edited) Lil snippet from chapter 3 to hold you guys over while I finish typing it Okay everyone, unharness yourselves, Jebediah, since you’re the leader of the ship, get up here, everyone else follow Jeb.” Hope you're ready Edited May 10, 2016 by Spaceception Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andem Posted May 10, 2016 Share Posted May 10, 2016 17 minutes ago, Spaceception said: Lil snippet from chapter 3 to hold you guys over while I finish typing it Okay everyone, unharness yourselves, Jebediah, since you’re the leader of the ship, get up here, everyone else follow Jeb.” Hope you're ready O_o Wot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted May 12, 2016 Author Share Posted May 12, 2016 3rd chapter is completely finished... Saved for the editing, expect it in a few days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KAL 9000 Posted May 16, 2016 Share Posted May 16, 2016 Love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted May 16, 2016 Author Share Posted May 16, 2016 37 minutes ago, KAL 9000 said: Love it Thanks, I'm a tiny bit stuck on chapter 4, but I have a couple ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legoclone09 Posted May 16, 2016 Share Posted May 16, 2016 I really liked it, can't wait for the fourth!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted May 16, 2016 Author Share Posted May 16, 2016 Just now, legoclone09 said: I really liked it, can't wait for the fourth!! Thanks At the very least, I hope to get chapter 4 onto google docs by the end of the month, and onto here by early June Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted May 17, 2016 Author Share Posted May 17, 2016 (edited) I have a very important question for you all: Should I make more KSP references? Also, for anyone wondering, the "3D printing robots" mentioned in chapter 3 were based on this, but on a much more massive scale: http://www.tethers.com/SpiderFab.html Edited May 17, 2016 by Spaceception Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legoclone09 Posted May 17, 2016 Share Posted May 17, 2016 I don't think more KSP references are needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted July 14, 2016 Author Share Posted July 14, 2016 I had to get rid of the little progress I had on chapter 4, but it'll be more realistic, so that's fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotallyNotHuman Posted July 15, 2016 Share Posted July 15, 2016 Yay, you're back! Also, do you need another guy to help review? Because I'm a writer myself (though nowhere as good as you) and my brain is burnt out from writing stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted July 15, 2016 Author Share Posted July 15, 2016 8 minutes ago, TotallyNotHuman_ said: Yay, you're back! Also, do you need another guy to help review? Because I'm a writer myself (though nowhere as good as you) and my brain is burnt out from writing stuff. Yep I think I'm good for "The Void" But I do need some more help with "The Children between worlds" Nice, I bet you're a pretty good writer. UPDATE FOR EVERYONE: My family is moving again in a few days, so there's going to be another setback for both books Luckily, it won't take nearly as long, but we still need to settle in, I'll try to write as much as I can for both during the drive though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotallyNotHuman Posted July 15, 2016 Share Posted July 15, 2016 1 minute ago, Spaceception said: Yep I think I'm good for "The Void" But I do need some more help with "The Children between worlds" Nice, I bet you're a pretty good writer. UPDATE FOR EVERYONE: My family is moving again in a few days, so there's going to be another setback for both books Luckily, it won't take nearly as long, but we still need to settle in, I'll try to write as much as I can for both during the drive though. Well, I was kind of hoping I'd get to edit this story (it's pretty freakin' awesome), but hey. As long as my brain is getting exercised in the literature department, I'm a happy camper. Checking out The Children Between Worlds now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Raging Sandwich Posted July 15, 2016 Share Posted July 15, 2016 On 2/4/2016 at 0:17 PM, Spaceception said: Also, I simulated the system idea I have, what do you think? If Universe Sandbox was free, I'd totally do something like this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted July 15, 2016 Author Share Posted July 15, 2016 10 minutes ago, The Raging Sandwich said: If Universe Sandbox was free, I'd totally do something like this! You can design your own planets here: http://planetmaker.wthr.us/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Raging Sandwich Posted July 25, 2016 Share Posted July 25, 2016 I've finally gotten time to read this and neadless to say, this is a lot better than anything I can come up with! Kudos to you, @Spaceception! As of this post I've only read up to Chapter 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted July 25, 2016 Author Share Posted July 25, 2016 Just now, The Raging Sandwich said: I've finally gotten time to read this and neadless to say, this is a lot better than anything I can come up with! Kudos to you, @Spaceception! As of this post I've only read up to Chapter 2. Thanks for the support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted August 17, 2016 Author Share Posted August 17, 2016 If there is a potentially habitable exoplanet around Proxima, should I change the destination? Or keep using Lalande? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legoclone09 Posted August 17, 2016 Share Posted August 17, 2016 1 minute ago, Spaceception said: If there is a potentially habitable exoplanet around Proxima, should I change the destination? Or keep using Lalande? You've started the story already, but maybe say in the beginning of the book that the closest possibly habitable planet is outdated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted August 17, 2016 Author Share Posted August 17, 2016 Just now, legoclone09 said: You've started the story already, but maybe say in the beginning of the book that the closest possibly habitable planet is outdated. I'm not that far in, all I need to do is change some names, and take away/add some things. But that's another possibility. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted August 26, 2016 Author Share Posted August 26, 2016 How do you guys like the beta version of the cover? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Raging Sandwich Posted August 26, 2016 Share Posted August 26, 2016 I applaud it, good man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaceception Posted August 26, 2016 Author Share Posted August 26, 2016 Here's the Alpha version Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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