Evolution Of a Story

[PLB]

This is a simple game that could make some kind of story.

To play: Copy the last persons version of the story, change something, and add something.

Rules: Maximum of five 10 changed words, 5 removed words, and 2 added sentences. Minimum of 5 changed words and 4 added words. Repeat posts must have 2 people between the last post.

I shall start:

Once upon a time there was a rocket with Jebediah Kerman in it.

[BigBoy734]

Once upon a time there was a spaceplane with Adhat Kerman inside

[Holo]

The spaceplane with Adhat Kerman inside swerved past the VAB.

[MGUARN]

The spaceshuttle with Adhat Kerman inside swerved past the control tower.the bill's pie went all over the windshield.

[Holo]

The spaceshuttle containing Adhat Kerman swerved past the vehicle assembly building. Bill's pie went all over the windshield. "Dammit Adhat, I told you to be careful!" he shouted through the radio.

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[Holo]

accidental double post, please ignore