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  On 11/5/2017 at 4:49 AM, Vanamonde said:

No matter which side you are for or against, and yes, even in fictional form, bringing up politics on this forum never ends well. The link to your story has been removed, @daniel l.. Please leave that sort of content for other places on the internet. 

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Very well.

Though I find it hard to not imagine politics of one form or another as being a motivation for a villain. Any villain or villain-group that seeks power over a nation, must have a political or religious ambition. If they didn't, then why would they want to take power in the first place?

Greed? Greed could be associated with capitalism.

A belief in universal fairness despite an unfair reality? That could be associated with communism.

A will to enforce the restrictions of their faith or lack thereof upon an unwilling population? That would qualify as religious extremism.

No matter what motivation you give a villain, as long as they seek power over a nation as the villains of my story do, it isn't possible for their motivation to not have a political or religious bend.

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  On 11/13/2017 at 8:51 AM, Earthlinger said:

Should we share little snippets of our stories? For like, criticism and such. Not the whole story, mind you, just a page or two that you felt was particularly well written and/or that you're proud of.

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Yeah sure why not?

Im bored so i think i will write, something. A simple, short story.

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A few pages from the book I'm writing. This passage is near the beginning, but it's still out of context so don't expect to fully understand everything :P

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Constructive criticism?

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  On 11/16/2017 at 8:46 PM, Findthepin1 said:

Thanks it's up

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Okay, so in terms of humour, that first one was hilarious. The idea for the second is also quite unique, and I feel like it could easily evolve into a very humorous and memorable story. Are the two related, btw? Or just different versions?

Regardless, you should definitely continue :D

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  On 11/16/2017 at 9:02 PM, Earthlinger said:

Okay, so in terms of humour, that first one was hilarious. The idea for the second is also quite unique, and I feel like it could easily evolve into a very humorous and memorable story. Are the two related, btw? Or just different versions?

Regardless, you should definitely continue :D

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Thanks! What do you mean first and second I only did one 

 

 

Edit: Oh the Scottish highelands one was someone else. I only did the one with Berd the farmer 

Here is another. It's about some army guys that are under orders to "stop the blob from spreading."

 

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  On 11/16/2017 at 10:09 PM, Findthepin1 said:

Edit: Oh the Scottish highelands one was someone else. I only did the one with Berd the farmer 

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Oh, my bad lol :P

It was the funniest one :D I'll read over the blob one later

  On 11/17/2017 at 3:48 AM, The Raging Sandwich said:

What kind of suggestions

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Amateur suggestions

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Deck 1- Airlock section one and forward docks

Deck 2 through 10- research labs

Deck 11 (five normal decks tall)- Sky Scanning center

Deck 12- Zero- G recreation

Deck 13(twenty-four normal decks tall)- Pressurized manufacturing area and four very large airlocks

Deck 14- Connection to spin gravity modules

Deck 15- Connection to ship yards section

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(Made using google draw.)

(Very WIP)

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