Foxbat Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 This reminded me of Babylon 4...perhaps it is being sent back to help?Looking forward to the next chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GDJ Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 Oh great. Now that thing is going to try to talk to the now extinct Humpback Whales and start boiling the oceans and messing things up real good.(Star Trek IV reference) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waterlubber Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 Kraken using your save as a sort of hoard? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parkaboy Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 Managed to squeeze yet another chapter before going out of town! Here it is:I'll try to follow the thread if I get wi-fi on my phone, but will only be back at my PC by Saturday. Have a nice week, everyone! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Dilsby Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 Great development! And now I remember this from the first post: 5. All “rescue†missions must be accepted. There’s going to be an in-story reason for that.Very nice and unique in-story explanation for this phenomenon. Also I love the ground crew guy--that little aside added another level to the main characters. Enjoy your break! I'll post some stuff tomorrow so folks can get their comix fix Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starhawk Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 Excellent work once again.I'm enjoying the ride. (Unlike Bob ).Happy landings! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMSP Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 This is turning out to be awesome!Great story telling!Can't wait to see what (or who) is there! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parkaboy Posted September 6, 2015 Author Share Posted September 6, 2015 Back from the hiatus: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yukon0009 Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Dun dun dun.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starhawk Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Beautiful work!I am so intrigued.Happy landings! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scotius Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 "We did not...yet." Now thats the words able to send a wave of chills down any sci-fi fan back. Rarely anything good happens after that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Dilsby Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Lots of great stuff here--the design of the 'escape pods' in the K2 station makes perfect sense for the presence of rescue-able kerbonauts, and now we have a wonderfully scifi time loop, reminds me a bit of some of my favorite ST:TNG episodes. Glad to have you back, keep it coming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noname117 Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Looks like we're in for an interesting time loop here! Just make sure Glery doesn't find out about her future self being back in time! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smjjames Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Is a paradox going to happen when past Glery meets future Glery?Then again, the future (Glery's past) is changed already, so...... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharkman Briton Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Ow, my head. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacetraindriver Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Sorry Kuzzter but this is SO MUCH MORE INTRGEING than Duna ore bust and Eve order 0. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starwhip Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Sorry Kuzzter but this is SO MUCH MORE INTRGEING than Duna ore bust and Eve order 0.I find myself agreeing with you. I'd fall for wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey stuff any day of the week. 'Course, E:O0 and D,OB have a completely different plot line and I still love them both. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Dilsby Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Sorry Kuzzter but this is SO MUCH MORE INTRGEING than Duna ore bust and Eve order 0.Thanks for the input! If you don't mind I'll just keep on writing anyway, as well as supporting Parkaboy's outstanding work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parkaboy Posted September 6, 2015 Author Share Posted September 6, 2015 I find myself agreeing with you. I'd fall for wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey stuff any day of the week. 'Course, E:O0 and D,OB have a completely different plot line and I still love them both. Well, I guess we can't really compare, since I'm going for a slightly different genre here. Kuzzter's stories are way more funny and adventure focused, while mine perhaps has a higher dose of mystery. They're similar in format, but have different flavors. And since reading them is free, you may as well enjoy all of them! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deddly Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Surely we can't compare two stories just because they are both comics? That's like comparing a Tesla Model S with a Renault Twizzy just because they are both electric...oh wait, they did actually print a comparison of those two vehicles...Anyway, my point is both stories are awesome in their own right.For the record, the Twizzy is NOT awesome... so maybe that wasn't the best comparison... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windows_x_seven Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 My mind turned into a LFO tank, and spontaneously exploded.This is some spooky stuff! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parkaboy Posted September 6, 2015 Author Share Posted September 6, 2015 Surely we can't compare two stories just because they are both comics? That's like comparing a Tesla Model S with a Renault Twizzy just because they are both electric...oh wait, they did actually print a comparison of those two vehicles...Anyway, my point is both stories are awesome in their own right.For the record, the Twizzy is NOT awesome... so maybe that wasn't the best comparison...Well, technically you can compare them. What I meant is that a story is good if it succeeds at what it's trying to do, and we can't really judge it by the standards of a different type of story. I don't think Eve: Order Zero is trying to be intriguing, so we can't fault it for being less intriguing than Plan Kappa, and it certainly isn't less interesting because of it. Sure you can like one more than the other, but that's more because you like one flavor/genre more than the other than a measure of the value of the story. I think Kuzzter's stories are very good at what they set out to do, and can only hope that Plan Kappa will be as good at what it's trying to do, which is something a bit different. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Zoom Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 I have also received a vision of the future!"So our mission is clear. For the sake of the planet, and all kerbalkind... we must find this 'Danny2462', and stop him." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parkaboy Posted September 8, 2015 Author Share Posted September 8, 2015 Chapter 7 is here! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windows_x_seven Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 OH SHI-Jeez, that explosion was quick!Will they respawn back? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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