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PRISON BREAK - A Community Short Story


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The sleep is interrupted, however. Once again, the heavy tramp of boots startles him out of his slumber, and he turns, bleary-eyed, to the front of the cell, where several guards are hurrying past, no doubt to break up some sort of fight.

Kerman sits there for a moment, contemplating his situation. He can feel the frustration welling up inside of him, and so he turns to his hobby of drawing with the bits and pieces of charcoal that lie around the floor:

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It then slowly dawned upon him that he had woken up, not once, but twice since he heard those alarms. He became suspicious that he was being used in some kind of drug testing scheme. As he stood in the dingy light, drenched in his own filth and no alarms to be heard, he hoped fervently that this, too would turn out to be just a dream.

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A ittle window in the metal door opens from outside. Then the door itself.
"Kerman!"
"I!"
"Hands!"
Our hero turns by back to the bars in a meter from the door which separate the door from his place, turns to the bars by back, puts his hands through thebars and feels his wrists handcuffed.
"Face to the wall!"
He stands to the wall, looking at it.
A door in the bar wall opens.
"To the exit! Run!"
Several friendly looking guards with a dog a hanging around in the corridor. Bars separate the corridor from the next corridor from the open side.
Kerman quickly runs out of his chamber through the door in the bars and the metal door, gets into corridor and stands to the wall, rising his handcuffed arms to the sky.

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On 04/11/2017 at 10:01 PM, Earthlinger said:

This will be done in two to three-sentence posts, where each user adds as much to the story as they can fit in two or three decent-sounding sentences.

I'm not saying this as a moderator, but any chance you could shorten that a little, @kerbiloid?

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19 minutes ago, Deddly said:

I'm not saying this as a moderator, but any chance you could shorten that a little, @kerbiloid?

For sure.

Suddenly Kerman woke up on the iron-hard sheet of steel that he called his bed, soaked in sweat.
He patted his iron bed with love, it was so sweet, so calming.

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The brief moment of bliss and relief was tarnished by the thought of going to the breakfast hall with the hundreds of other inmates. He didn't like the noisy clatter of dishes and conversation, and usually sat by himself. Preferably in a corner.

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