Hi again. So technicaly there are many problems.
1. Bad wings: There are many wings you can use, also, dont refrain from using the move/rotate tool.
2. Weak engines: You have too weak engines and if i were you i would add some rapiers using a radial attachment point or a bi-coupler, also try making it smaller and adding nuclear engines/mining posts to increase range.
3. Lose some weight: Use cargo bays and try using more efficient engines with maybe, just maybe, some mining equipment, try adding radiators.
FYI: I dont speak spanish, and i am on the PS4 too, i hope this helped!