AlamoVampire Posted August 10 Share Posted August 10 (edited) Richard Dawkins traveled Nairobi, looking scientifically 124508102024 new page Edited August 10 by AlamoVampire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdJ Posted August 11 Share Posted August 11 Richard Dawkins traveled Nairobi, looking scientifically nonplussed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 11 Share Posted August 11 (edited) Richard Dawkins traveled Nairobi, looking scientifically nonplussed messily. New: Paranthropus 220008102024 Edited August 11 by AlamoVampire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 12 Share Posted August 12 Paranthropus, evolutionary 220008112024 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 13 Share Posted August 13 Paranthropus, evolutionary successors 222308122024 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 14 Share Posted August 14 Paranthropus, evolutionary successors to 011208142024 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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AlamoVampire Posted August 19 Share Posted August 19 Paranthropus, evolutionary successors to their ancestors Australopithecus who preceded 052108192024 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 20 Share Posted August 20 Paranthropus, evolutionary successors to their ancestors Australopithecus who preceded Ardipithecus 052208202024 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 21 Share Posted August 21 Paranthropus, evolutionary successors to their ancestors Australopithecus who preceded Ardipithecus by 052208212024 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdJ Posted August 21 Share Posted August 21 Paranthropus, evolutionary successors to their ancestors Australopithecus who preceded Ardipithecus by far. New: Cheese Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 21 Share Posted August 21 Cheese, dairy, 142708212024 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdJ Posted August 22 Share Posted August 22 Cheese, dairy relocates Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 22 Share Posted August 22 (edited) Cheese, dairy, and relocates ———English Grammatical Disclaimer——— added prior to relocates because there was punctuation added in play prior to the preceding post and in accordance with the rules of proper English grammar required this action to bring the sentence into grammatical compliance after the prior entry took the sentence out of proper grammatical compliance with correct English grammar and English sentence structure and syntax. ———End English Grammatical Disclaimer——— 194108212024 195108212024 Edited August 22 by AlamoVampire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdJ Posted August 22 Share Posted August 22 Per rule 3, you may not add a comma after your word, only before it. So the comma after dairy was removed and a grammatically correct continuation was added. "and relocates" after Cheese, dairy makes no logical sentence so the "and" will be moved after relocates. Cheese, dairy relocates and soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 22 Share Posted August 22 (edited) Cheese, dairy, and relocates soon away. sentenced formally euthanized. new: Spite 212408212024 readjusted back to grammatically correct and killed the sentence. 212508212024 Also i cite rule 2: Keep the sentence grammatically correct. That means with the comma after word 1 a second comma was and is required. 212708212024 Edited August 22 by AlamoVampire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimera Industries Posted August 22 Author Share Posted August 22 1 minute ago, AlamoVampire said: sentenced formally euthanized. In the future please consider working out the problem by communicating, rather than cutting off a chance for further discussion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 22 Share Posted August 22 (edited) Moving the sentence along… ———current sentence below——— Spite fuels 213108212024 213308212024 Edited August 22 by AlamoVampire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdJ Posted August 22 Share Posted August 22 On 12/9/2023 at 2:47 PM, Kimera Industries said: Rules: Each post must add one word to the current sentence, including the current sentence itself. Keep the sentence grammatically correct. Add punctuation (commas, apostrophes) where appropriate. Punctuation is not added after the new word, it is added when a new word is added which makes certain punctuation before it necessary. You may only add a word before the last word in the sentence when necessary. Names are still added one word at a time. The next person can give them a title (still one word at a time) or a middle/last name if they wish. Keep it appropriate, please. No spam posting or posting two or more times in a row. Avoid themed sentences. In the past, they've led to nothing but trouble. If you end the sentence prematurely or attempt to manipulate it, you take away the fun from others. Please keep this in mind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlamoVampire Posted August 22 Share Posted August 22 (edited) Pushing the sentence on again….to keep the game moving. ———Current Sentence Below——— Spite fuels anger 230108212024 230208212024 Edited August 22 by AlamoVampire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanamonde Posted August 22 Share Posted August 22 I don't understand the rules. @Kimera Industries, as formulator of those rules, which was the last valid play? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimera Industries Posted August 22 Author Share Posted August 22 (edited) There were many issues with the old rules, so I reworked them. Please, PLEASE point out any errors or contradictions so I can fix them. Here are the new rules: Each post adds one word to the current sentence, including the current sentence itself. If this is broken, refer to Rule 7. The sentence may not end up being grammatically correct. If this happens, refer to Rule 7. Punctuation does not matter. You may add it if you wish, but if you feel concern, please refer to Rule 7. Names count as a word. The next person can choose to expand the name, or not. If a name you wanted to happen didn't, refer to Rule 7. Keep it appropriate and follow the forum rules, please. In case of stress or concern, refer to Rule 7. You do not control the sentence. You may have a vision in mind for the sentence, it will not happen. If that upsets you, refer to Rule 7. "DON'T PANIC." -Douglas Adams Edited August 22 by Kimera Industries Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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