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Kerbfleet: A Jool Odyssey-CHAPTER 22 pg 2: Yet >another< narrative device!


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26 minutes ago, Ultimate Steve said:

What? It's already been a whole year since Valentina's egg?


Wow, time really flies.

That's exactly what I thought. I can't believe this comic has been going on for well over a year!

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Well, I mean, the goal of this series was to show your journeys to duna and eve and the Jool five mission. Check

It was also to show how awesome a writer you are. Check

Finally, it provided most of the community with an awesome time reading your stories. Check

Then you tried to make it interesting by adding some combat, which is fine but it corrupted the story and made the story all about the combat, not the missions. Honestly, stock ksp combat isn't very entertaining, if you have BD Armory installed, combat would be better, but it wouldn't have helped the story along at well because the series was supposed to be stock and you installing a battle mod would have had terrible results. So yes, it got a bit long, I used to read all of Kerbfleet, but as soon as you started writing the combat stuff, I signed off. I periodically looked at it but it lost my interest. But if you ever want to do a story using a planet pack, that would be great. Like Gallieo's planet pack, why not that? By the way, this is not criticism, I am just speaking my mind, and I want to congratulate you coming up with such a great story in the first place. :wink: 

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"Kouston, we have several problems, but that doesn't matter so we want to continue on with the mission."
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Just my 2¢, but I think this thread should be cleaned up and only the comic remains. Since the story is over, the only thing that is relevant is the story itself.

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har har har veeeery funny @Kuzzter. Can't wait for the next installment!

9 hours ago, something said:

April Fools Day is over. Message not removed. That's the end then. If any moderator sees this message, then please lock the topic and let this story rest in peace.

 

9 hours ago, Deddly said:

Sure thing, @something. I'm sure Kuzzter has already forgotton about it, otherwise he'd have gotten up in the middle of the night to post "April Fools hahahahaah".

Thread locked forever

 

1 hour ago, Dman979 said:

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1 hour ago, GDJ said:

Just my 2¢, but I think this thread should be cleaned up and only the comic remains. Since the story is over, the only thing that is relevant is the story itself.

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

On 3/31/2017 at 6:53 PM, Angel-125 said:

Well, last year, Valentina laid an egg...

Wait what?

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